請英文高手幫我翻譯一篇簡易英文。急!!!20點!!!

版大您好, 也容Panda try try ㄅ; 如下: 我今天的主題是電影。Today my topic is on “movies”. *如要口語化一些, 我會建議這樣翻 “Today, I will be talking about Movies”. Topic = 主題
我從小就喜歡電影，我常常看電影，大約是一個月或看兩到三部，喜歡的類型不拘，但最無法抗拒的是驚悚片。Ever since I was little, I have always loved movies, and would watch them on frequent basis, averaging two to three movies per month. I like movies of all genres, with thriller being my favorite. on frequent basis = 常常genres = 類型thriller = 驚悚片
也許是被我的哥哥影響，不曉得是不是他也會害怕的關係，以前只要看恐怖片一定會要我陪他一起看，所以when I was a little girll,I always see the horror movie with my brother. 練就了我的膽量。Perhaps it is due to my brother’s always demanding that I watch horror films with him out of fear as a kid, I no longer get scared easily.(版大真不好意思, 您用心良苦自己寫了一句英文, 但Panda覺得有些重複所以沒放進來 = - =)
關於恐怖片，最印象深刻的是一部叫做鬼影的泰國恐怖片.And speaking of horror films, “Shutter” has definitely made the biggest impression on me.(鬼影的英文片名叫做Shutter: http://tw.movie.yahoo.com/movieinfo_main.html/id=988) the biggest impression = 最印象深刻 故事大綱是這樣的，男主角是個攝影師，某天與女友半夜開車回家時不慎撞倒一名女子，但兩人當下卻無下車探視傷者，反而加速逃離現場.The main character is a photographer, and while driving home in the middle of the night with his girlfriend, he accidentally hits a woman. Rather than doing something about the situation, they flee the scene instead.(你會發現我在描述電影情節時是用現在式而非過去式, 因為劇情是虛幻的, 從來沒發生過, 所以用現在式就可) flee the scene = 加速逃離現場 意外發生後，無法解釋的怪象接踵而來，攝影師發現她拍的照片中總有奇怪的光影擋在鏡頭前，而有些照片裡的神祕女子的影像竟然貌似被他們撞倒的女生，接著男主角開始噩夢連連，肩膀上也開始有了莫名的痛楚…。Since then, strange occurrences start to happen around them. The photographer keeps on noticing peculiar auras blocking the camera, and faces of the female models start to resemble that of the woman he killed. Afterwards, the main character starts to have frequent nightmares while suffering strange pain on his shoulders.(你可能會想, 奇怪, 不是說用現在式就可, 為什麼Panda要用killed而不是 kill呢? Good question, 因為對主角而言, 那已成了過去式) strange occurrences = 無法解釋的怪象peculiar auras = 奇怪的光影
寫不下 = - = 其它放在意見欄

2012-12-28 10:13:38 補充：
這部電影中，讓人嚇一跳的部份，音效佔大多數，劇情緊張刺激，讓人忍不住想在恐怖場景出現時遮住自己的眼睛。
Sound effect is the most scary part of the movie, coupled with a thrilling storyline, it often makes people cover their eyes out of fear.


thrilling storyline =劇情緊張刺激

2012-12-28 10:14:39 補充：
小時候，每當在家看完驚悚電影總是不敢一個人上廁所，或是睡覺時一定得開一盞小燈，甚至是常常自己嚇自己，被陽台的雨衣給嚇到等等的…。
現在我長大了，不再因為恐怖片而失眠了。

2012-12-28 10:14:49 補充：
As a child, I never had enough courage to go to the washroom alone after watching horror movies, and was often scared by silly little things, such as the raincoat hanging out on the porch. As a result, I always had to leave a dim light on when sleeping.


dim light = 小燈/微弱的燈

2012-12-28 10:15:04 補充：
學英文不只是背單字記文法, 最重要的是要有邏輯...

Hope it helps!

2012-12-28 13:06:00 補充：
To Chiyo,

寫得不錯, 但現在式跟過去式還是得辨明

Keep up the good work!

2012-12-29 04:56:08 補充：
阿漏掉一句，現在ㄅ上：

現在我長大了，不再因為恐怖片而失眠了。
Now that I am fully grown, I no longer suffer from sleepless nights associated with horror movies.

你好！！
在網路上的「Seventeen數位影像專業社群」攝影教學非常優喔！
我個人非常推薦！！這不止教攝影還有教彩妝.模特兒入門課程呢~
不論是愛好攝影的新手玩家、素人MD或專業模特兒、以及服務整體設計造型師們可以隨時發起、參與、提供各類主題、場景的外拍或棚拍活動…等，它們們也提供您一個可以自行展現作品的展示區（如：人物、主題設計、景觀、商展活動、棚拍…等等）
不論是喜好攝影的朋友、愛好自我展現的模特兒、甚至是希望成為整體造型設計，都能在這裡找到而且建構出系列化與系統化的專業完整之路。有興趣可上官網了解相關課程.「Seventeen數位影像專業社群」 (複製去搜尋即可!!)

你好！我不算英文高手, 不過比起中文, 我英文作文的確比較好一些... (嗚嗚, 我這台灣人做的好失敗啊～ Orz)
Anyways, 若是我的話我會這麼寫, 希望對你有幫助！
p.s. 我在外國讀書, 所以作文可能比較... 像外國人吧...希望你還可以接受... TAT

My topic today is on movies.
I've loved movies since I was little and watched them very often, about two to three times every month. I liked all kinds of movies, but I am especially drawn to horror films. Perhaps it is because of my brother who- maybe because he is afraid of them himself- would always want me to watch horror movies with him, So when I was a little girl, I would often watch horror movies with my brother, which helped me to become less and less afraid of them.
Of all the horror movies I've watched, the one that had the greatest impact on me was a Tai horror movie called Shutter. The story line is roughly as follows: The main character is a photographer. One night, when he was driving home with his girlfriend, he accidentally hit a woman. Neither he nor his girlfriend got out of the car to check on the victim, but hurriedly left the scene of the accident. After the accident, strange, inexplicable things began to happen. The photographer noticed weird shadows blocking his camera lens whenever he tried taking a photo, and the mysterious woman that appeared in his pictures seemed to be the woman that was hit by his car! After that, the main character started getting nightmares, and strange pains on his shoulder…
In this movie, the main cause of fear was mostly the music, and coupled with the fast paced, exciting plot line, often made me want to cover my eyes at the scariest parts.
When I was still little, I would be so scared after watching a horror movie that I would be afraid to go to the bathroom by myself, or I would have to keep a lamp on while sleeping. Often I would even be startled by myself, or by the ponchos hanging on our balcony...
Fortunately, now that I am older, I no longer get deprived of sleep because of horror movies!


嗯... 有問題的話可以問我, 我盡量回答 :)
希望對你有幫助！

My topic today is movies.I've liked the film, I often watch movies, about a month or two or three, like either type, but most can't resist thrillers.May be affected by my brother, do not know whether he will be afraid of relationships, previously seen watching horror movie will definitely want me to accompany him, sowhen I was a little girll,I always see the horror movie with my brother. Trained my guts.On terrorist tablets, most impression deep of is one called ghost shadow of Thailand terrorist tablets, story outline is such of, men protagonist is a photographer, a days and girlfriend midnight drove home Shi accidentally hit down one woman, but two people now is no got off visits injured, instead accelerated fled site, accident occurred Hou, cannot explained of blame as followed, photographer found she took of photos in the total has strange of light retaining in lens Qian, and some photos in of mystery woman of image has seemingly is they hit down of girls, And actor started a nightmare, also began to sense pain shoulder. ...In the film, people gave me quite a start part, sound effects are the majority, drama and excitement, people can't help but want to appear in a horror scene covers his eyes.As a child, watching horror movies always afraid people go to the toilet at home, be sure to open a small lamp or sleep, or even often scared their own, raincoat to the balcony was scared and so on ....Now when I grow up, no longer suffered from insomnia because of the horror film.

Today, my topic is focus on “movies”.

I have always liked the movie since I was very young. I watch movie frequently, about two or three movies per month. I like any kind of movies; however, thriller is my favorite. I might be influenced by my elder brother. I am not sure if he was scared by the horror movie too. He always asked me to watch the horror movie with him. Therefore, I have always watched the horror movie with my brother to train my guts since I was a little girl.

About horror films, the most impressive is a Thai horror film called ghost synopsis. It is a story about a photographer. One day, when he and his girl friend were driving home at midnight, they accidentally knocked down a woman. They two did not get off the car to take care of the injured woman, but accelerated run away. After that, a lot of unbelievable weird things happened. For example, strange light and shadow appeared in his photographs. The mysterious images of the woman in some photos look like the girl they knocked down. Then, the actor began nightmares. He also starts feeling pain in his shoulder. In this movie, Sound effect is the major part to scare people. The excitement of the story made people want to cover their eyes during the horror scene appeared.

When I was a little girl, I was always scared to go to the bathroom by myself after I watched the horror movie at home. I always kept a small lamp on when I went to bed. I even threaten by the raincoat hung in our own balcony. Now I have grown up and I will not be sleepless just because of the horror film.

2012-12-28 04:02:19 補充：
Today, my topic is focus on “movies”. should be changed to
Today, my topic is focused on “movies”.