求高人文章檢查Eng

In senior high, I studied Geography and ICT,as I had great interest in them and I would like to study them again at university if I were given the chance. Of cause,it would be grateful if I could study Psychology or Social Work, too.

I still remembered the first lesson of Geography when I was form 3 and found it interesting and I got good marks, so I decided to study it again in senior high. Then everything changed, it was much more difficult than I thought. especially in the studying trips and workshops which was great and was much better than indoor study. I could see the real rocks and close to the nature. I thought that I ought to continue the study in university.

ICT, it seemed that didn’t have relationship with Geography, that was true, but I decided to study it too. When I was a form 1 student, my father bought me a computer for doing my lessons, which was the first time I had my own computer, I started to acquire the technical skills by studying computer magazines. Then I became a fan of it. When in form 4, I studied ICT and became the head of school computer club, while I acquired more technical skills and became more fond of it.

I thought my life in the university would be great, I could learn more and get more knowledge and experience through the lessons and practical works. I hoped that I could gain better achievement in university so as to fufil my dream!

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I have great interest in it ........
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I would like to study it again at university if I have [a] chance.

I still remember the first lesson of Geography when I was in form 3

When I [was] in form 4, I studied ICT and I became the leader of [the] school computer club

I hope I can have [a] better development in [the] university and studying in [it] is my dream!