求英文翻譯！關於愛情的

這段旅程從十月二十號開始，而它並不會結束，我們將會走向永遠We, on the 20th day of Oct. , embarked on an epic journey, are heading for eternity.

版本一：
Our journey, since twentieth October
and it will never end
we will, and we are, going towards the eternity

版本二：
This journey started on twentieth october,
and it will never end.
We will walk towards forever

This journey starts on October 20th, and it will never end, we will walk on the path of forever.

這段旅程從十月二十號開始，而它並不會結束，我們將會走向永遠
The endless journey will be set out on October 20th, leading us towards eternity.

Coles翻得蠻好的啦。只是還可以再順一點：

This (wondeerful) journey we started on October 20th shall never come to an end. Together, we will walk into eternity.

「這段旅程從十月二十號開始，而它並不會結束，我們將會走向永遠」

It's an eternal journey we have that starts from 20th of October.

Our love will last forever.

*我不逐字翻，翻譯供參考。

2012-12-15 20:21:52 補充：
感謝James讚賞及修正。

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