中譯英 (不要用翻譯工具哦)

2012-12-06 7:56 pm
今年,我校園電視臺參加了一個名為「童眼看世界」電視短片製作的香港區選拔賽,并奪得了亞軍及最佳溝通主題大獎,我作為其中參與幕後製作的一份子,深感榮幸與感恩!
這個4分鐘的短片,講述了一位同學,從前認為自己生活在一個聲音嘈雜的世界,甚至有點厭煩,慢慢地,她發現身邊的聲音越來越少,代替的是電腦鍵盤“滴滴塔塔”的聲音,電腦遊戲的聲音所發出的冷漠的聲音!她想找同伴傾訴,同伴遞給她一部智能電話,示意上網交流。這時,她感到世界沒有了聲音,亦失去了色彩,是個黑白的冰冷世界.......直到一天,她主動關心一位受傷的同學,久違的聲音又重現了,世界也回復繽紛的色彩…
短片帶出了一個訊息,人與人之間需要真實的聲音,需要用愛去溝通,先進的電子科技是不能來替代的!
整個短片,從創作,演出,取景,攝錄到幕後製作,都由同學積極參與,我負責攝錄等後期製作部份,當然要感謝老師的寶貴意見及支持鼓勵!當中最令我感受至深的是我們的團隊合作,在假期中抽空回校創作及拍攝,台前幕後的緊密配合,終於為學校贏得大獎,更重要的是帶給大家一個正確的訊息-----愛,需要聲音!

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2012-12-07 1:33 am
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This year, I participated in a TV short film production titled "Seeing the World through Children’s Eyes " for the Hong Kong tournament, and won the first runner-up and the best communications award. I was greatly honored to be a member of the production team!In this 4-minute film, the story was about a student, who thought she lived in a noisy world, to a point of being annoyed; gradually, she found there are lesser and lesser voices, instead they are replaced by " tick-tack " sound from the computer keyboard, and unemotional sounds from computer games! She wanted to talk to her friends, but her friend showed her a smart phone and motion her to whatsapp to communicate. At such moment, she felt sound no longer exists in the world, and it lost its color, it became a cold, black and white world... Not until one day, she pay a visit to care for an injured classmate, the long lost voice reappeared, the world resumed with colors…The short film brings out a message, people’s connection needs to have real voices, needs to communicate by love, in which no advanced electronic technology can substitute!The short film was entirely made, from creating the script, acting, scene setting, videotography to editing, by students. I am responsible for the post-production editing. I certainly want to thank the teacher 's (最好寫出這老師的名稱) advice and encouragement! The most memorable part for me is our teamwork, in cooperation on writing the story, filming and editing throughout the school holidays. And now we have won an award. Above all, we have brought you a positive message - love, need to have a voice.
參考: 未必完美,但盡依原意英寫(不是翻譯)
2012-12-07 2:47 am
This year, my campus television station participated in one named “the child to see the world” the television short film manufacture Hong Kong area trials, and have captured the second place and the best communication subject big prize, I took participation secretly manufactured an individual contribution, deeply felt was honored with feels grateful!
This 4 minute short films, narrated a schoolmate, formerly thought oneself lives in a sound noisy world, even a little was sick of, she discovered slowly side sound are more and more few, replaces is the computer keyboard “the drop drop tower tower” the sound, the indifferent sound which the computer games sound sends out! She wants to ask the companion to pour out, the companion gives a her intelligence telephone, the hint surfer exchange.By now, she felt the world sound, also has not lost the color, was a black and white ice-cold world .......Until one day, she cared about on own initiative is injured schoolmate, has not seen you for a long time the sound has reappeared, the world also replies the riotous color…
The short film has carried over a news, between the human and the human needs the real sound, needs to use to like communicating, the advanced electronic technology cannot substitute!
The entire short film, from the creation, the performance, selects a scene, absorbs records to secretly manufactures, all positively participation by schoolmate, I absorb responsibly record and so on the later periods to manufacture the part, certainly must thank teacher's valued suggestion and the support encouragement! Middle most makes me feel deeply to is our team cooperation, pumps out the school creation and the photography in the vacation, in front of Taiwan the secretly close coordination, finally wins the big prize for the school, more importantly takes to everybody a correct news-----The love, needs the sound!
2012-12-06 8:24 pm
---The translation C/E to Wongwing----
In the computer world,she recognized no voice around until the wounding sound from peers.
She need love to communicate;love needs voice,not IT.
Thanks for the video-production to voice her thoughts
2012-12-06 8:13 pm
This year, I attended a campus television station called "the children see the world " video produced by the Hongkong tournament, and won the first runner-up and best communication awards, which involved in the making of me as a member of the honor and gratitude!This 4 minute film, tells the story of a former classmate, find themselves living in a noisy world, even a bit bored, slowly, she found him voice is less and less, instead of the computer keyboard " drop tower " sound, computer game sound emitted by the cold voice! She wants to talk to her companion, companion of a smart phone, Internet communication. At this time, she felt the world without sound, also lost the color, is a black and white world so cold ... Until one day, she volunteered to care for an injured students, I've heard once more, the world also reply color ...Short film conveys a message, people need true voice, need to use love to communicate, advanced electronic technology is not a substitute!The short film, from the creation, performance, photography, videography to behind the scenes, with the active participation of students, I am responsible for video post-production part, of course I want to thank the teacher 's advice and encouragement! Most makes me feel deeply that our team, during the vacation time to writing and photography, to work closely with the behind the scenes for the school, finally winning the jackpot, more important is to bring you a correct message - love, need sound!


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