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When Peter was born and then his mother abandoned him. Later on, a man found him down the lane in rubbish bin and took care of him. The day after, he gave him a nickname as Pet. When at the age of 5, Peter had grown up with the ability to look after himself . One month later, the man took him to go aboard. When they embarked the ship and were living above the engine room. Suddenly he found his father who was also on board the ship. When they arrived and found that his father had fallen into the sea then Peter come to the rescue but all of their clothes got wet. As the result, their dress looked ugly. When they arrived the bus stop, suddenly, an absurd man came out and use abusive language to Peter with a very peculiar accent. When Peter went to attend school, he was given the prize. Why he could receive the prize because some people thought that someone might be responsible. When the man died, peter were very sad but he accidentally found his mother near the bank of the river and finally he lived with her.

When Peter was born, his mother [] abandoned him. [] A man found Peter [] in the rubbish bin. So, he took care of him. [The day after, he gave him an abbreviation.][這句完全不明白？給peter一個簡(縮)寫？你想講「小名」「花名」「乳名」「代號」？] When, Peter was five, his abdomen was big and he has ability to go toilet.[這句不明白:他肚子大跟他能夠去廁所有何關係又跟他五歲有甚麼特性…你好像說他五歲前從來不會去廁所…] One month later, the man took him [] aboard. When they got [] on the ship they lived above the engine room. [Abrupt he found a man absolute abolish a man able.][這句講乜？我用中文字代入英文句都解唔到sorry！] When they arrived (where), his dad had fallen to the water. Peter [] saved him but the clothes was soaked.[我估你意思是(吸)濕滿了水] So their clothes looked ugly. They arrived the bus stop [suddenly],[他們arrived在那裏?你是巴士突然停下bus stopped suddently(他們在巴士上)還是他們到逹一個巴士站bus stop就不會suddenly啦] an absurd-looking man came out and abused Peter and the man accent(口音?) was very different from his[或寫出怎樣different]. When Peter went to [academic] [academic是形容詞或指學術界 – 你意思是他成為學者?became a professor?], he [] accepted the prize.[奬項與前句冇關的…他得甚麼奬?六合彩?] Why he got the prize because [] someone (who?) accidentally [] helped him. When the man died, Peter was very sad but then he accidentally saw his mum near the river [where did the river come from?] so he went to live with his mum.

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