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1. Improving Time Management Skill
Time management is an essential skill for everybody. In order to sleep well at night without worrying about the unfinished assignment or the upcoming exam, we suggest that students should prioritize their daily activities and make sure to finish important assignments and revision before leisure activities. They will then have a better sleep knowing that they are prepared for the next day.

2. Limiting the Use of Electronics
Using of Cell phone, playing video games, and chatting online contribute greatly to the lack of sleep among students. Setting a reasonable time for which such activities must stop will help to prevent insufficient sleep.

3. Taking a bath or Listening to Soft Music
Some people may have difficult falling asleep. Taking a relaxing bath or/and listening to soft music before going to bed might be a good way to get themselves to relax and relieve all the stress they have.

4. Establishing a Healthy Routine
Establishing a healthy routine is also very important to students. Students tend to go to bed late and wake up late while they are on vacations and when school starts, they have a hard time changing the routine. Along with that, sitting in front of computers and TVs for long hours could potentially slow down their metabolism and cause them to fall asleep when they are not supposed to. Eating right, exercising adequately, and going to bed early are the most fundamental way to sustain good sleeping quality.

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1. Improving Time Management Skill
… by deciding which assignment you should get started first and study for the exam before you watch [雖然go watching本身沒有大問題，但由於接下還有另一樣，你似乎意識是go watching…or go using實有要重覆結構才成，倒不如簡化為simple present tense反而更易讀] TV or use the internet. I am sure everyone will sleep much better [] knowing that they are ready for tomorrow. [除了文法外，內容指assignment…get start first和study for the exam before >>>的時空排列和關係都太襱統了:一個是start的時間，另一個study for exam之間基本上沒關係…start first和study跟有多少和那些重要沒有argue到，我建議是說: which order of assignments (指全部都考慮) should be completed (要做完的規劃) and finish studying for the exam review before…]

2. Limiting the Use of Electronics
… are all big parts of reason why [] students nowadays do not have enough sleep. … [OK]

3. Taking a bath or Listening to Soft Music
For some people, falling asleep could be very difficult []. Taking a bath and/or [英文的習慣寫法只會是and/or 不會是or/and – 不論你是想說or先還是and先是無意義的] listening to soft music before going to bed might be a good way to get themselves to relax and relieve all the stress []. [relax和relieve…stress都是同一個主詞themselves…所以文法上不會再後加them等代名詞] 4. Establishing a Healthy Routine [sorry英文沒有healthy/health routine這詞彙的，但可以當是自創-留心文章一致的寫法]
Establishing a healthy routine … Students tend to go to … while they are on holidays [vacations是工作職業用語-不要誤會這詞是深一些會對多一點，這裏反而是用錯詞義] and before school starts [應該是開學前遲睡遲起吧], they have a hard time to change this routine for school days. Along with that, sitting in front of computers and TVs all the time does not help them to sleep better either because it could potentially slowing down their metabolism and cause them to fall asleep when they are not supposed to.[這段應該放在2內] Eating right, exercising adequately, and going to bed early [early太沒指導性的意見，延續你這段的意思我會說going to bed at a fixed hour everyday] are …[OK].