Last year, I went to japan during the Christmas holiday ,this was my first time trip there. Although we spent many hours on the plane, we were still very excited about the trip.
First, we tired the delicious food, such as sushi, sashimi and remen. I prefer eating sushi to eating sashimi. Secondly, we went to the Tokyo Disneyland. We had many fun there. Finally, we went shopping. There were many special things to buy and we bought many souvenir there .I would rather go shopping than go to Tokyo Disneyland.
Although it just a shout trip, we were enjoyed my trip.
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2012-11-19 3:37 am
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2012-11-19 5:23 am
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-----A check on the content for an acceptable standard----------Last year I went to Japan during the Christmas holiday. This was my first trip there. Although we spent many hours on the plane,we were still very excited (in connection) with the trip.
----Firstly,we tried the delious food,such as sushi,sashimi,and rumen. I (prefered) eating sushi (to) sashimi.
----Secondary, we went to the Tokyo Disneyland. We had (much entertainment) and fun there.
----Finally, we went shopping. There were many special things to buy and we bought many souvenir in the( tourist resort.) I would rather go shopping than (going) to Tokyo Disneyland.
----Although it was just a short trip, we all enjoyed it(110 words).
2012-11-21 4:40 pm
remen <- 錯字
拉面 = ramen
remen是牛/羊之類的反雛動物的第一個胃…就是瘤胃…
雖然…可能都食得既…
拉面 = ramen
remen是牛/羊之類的反雛動物的第一個胃…就是瘤胃…
雖然…可能都食得既…
2012-11-19 5:29 am
Japan用大階. Christmas唔駛用the
We tried to eat好D
To 後面不可加ing
We had fun in there就得
句尾太多there
此屬意見
We tried to eat好D
To 後面不可加ing
We had fun in there就得
句尾太多there
此屬意見
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