求翻譯(感想),英文高手!!!

1) Through the day camp I learnt the spirit of cooperation,
helping each other to achieve goals,
and understanding more with the teammates.
In addition, after complete of the activities, I've trained my personal guts,
the courage to take the first step, becoming confident and have definite views.

2) From the training, it trained my leadership skills and respond ability,
because our members are supported me after I proposed my views,
the tasks were completed successful that I led finally.
Moreover, I've improve my communication skills with our members
to reach a consensus.
Finally, I believe that these valuable experience is a great help in
my future career.

-----A Translation on the Thought---------
-----The background:-a group of people venturing adventures,rope-like game(up to 5 meters high) foot-bridge&trail game,etc.
------(1)Thoughts on the topic you want to write:-
---------Through this day camp,I learned spirit of cooperation,helping each other to achieve our goals;deepen understanding with teammates. In addition,after completed the training activities on personal courage,the confidence to take the first step etc.,my timid,shy,self-conscious are gone,and I have definite views and assertive personality dominated.

-----(2)How learning help on both my future work and help:-
--------From the training, my leadership skills were exercised and worked out on how to respond in vigilant!;Because our members were supporting me after I proposed my viewpoint. the tasks were completed smooth and successful under my leadership.
-------Furthermore, I have informed my communication skills with my members reaching a concensus for all!
-------Lastly, I believe that this valuable experience is a great help in my future career in society!

1.透過今次既day camp學到合作精神,互相幫助來協力達成目標,與隊友加深認識. 此外,完成當中的活動後訓練了個人的膽量,勇於踏出第一步,變得吾怕羞,有主見~


英文即：

1 through the only day camp to learn the spirit of cooperation and help each other to work together to reach a goal with teammates understanding In addition, after the completion of the activities in which the training of personal courage, the courage to take the first step to become I shy,assertive ~



2.從中,訓練我的領導才能及應變能力,因為提出自我意見後,組員都十分認同,並由我帶領下最終順利完成任務.再者,改善了我的溝通技巧,與組員達成共識.最後,相信呢D寶貴既經驗對我日後投身社會工作有很大的幫助


英文即：

2 from train my leadership and adaptability, the proposed self-views, the crew are very much agree, by me under the leadership of the ultimately successful completion of the task. Moreover, to improve my communication skills with team members to reach a consensus. Finally,I believe it D valuable both experience a great help in my future career social work