英文作文 改錯處

We live in the present,not in the past.If you want your essay in present tense,here&there,use it.
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My learning and study comes from Bhddhist Hung Sean Chau Memorial College. I came upon cases about cheerfulness and misery in my school life;but I can assimilate learnings which make me progress in the cases. I learn how to be a dutiful student.

I hold a good relationship with others because I am an approachable person. When my friends fall to embarrassment, I will help them practically even I will suffer losses. It is because I believe "all for one and one for all". proverb. Even now, I still believe this thoughtful saying.

My active character makes me to take up sport when I was in Form one. I joined basketball team not only raise my skill, but also letting me learn many truth. I lose basketball race many times in Form one.Therefore I am insensitive for failure and I know failure can push me to progress. However,I need to drop out basketball team for some reasons. Finally, I undergo some twists and turns to be back to basketball team until Form five. In addition to basketball, I also like Taekwondo. It not only raises my health condition,but also protects my family and me as well-being.

I am a chairperson of Consignation Club in school. I care health and conservation problems so I decide to join this club. I learn many child care in this club and I am selected appropriately to be a chairperson. I get experience about the management and functionary (n) in this position.

2012-11-10 12:01:33 補充：
----Some students feel confused on how to choose a career after graduation;but I am not. I want to be a policeman as a career since I was born.