英文句子改寫

Foreigners need a lot of help living far from home and facing a difficult language and culture, and ....

您的句子有部分重複詞語, 已幫您訂正.

分詞片語可改寫為副詞子句形式:

Foreigners need a lot of help while they live far from home and face a
difficult language and culture, and ....




2012-11-09 12:13:06 補充：
Louis大師001意見, 礙難贊同.
原句的分詞片語並非緊跟主詞, 故無關限定或非限定; 這樣的結構是副詞性質的分詞構句, 而非形容詞性質的分詞片語.
本句是一個廣泛概念的敘述, 並非針對特定的一群外國人.

如果原句是:
Foreigners living far from home and facing a difficult language and facing a difficult language and culture need a lot of help...
我就贊同Louis大師的見解.

Foreigners need a lot of help living far from home and facing a difficult language and culture,and ....

這樣比較OK

並不是所有的foreigners都有這樣的問題，所以這些分詞片語應該是修飾主詞foreigners，加以限定的，所以宜改成形容詞子句，繼續限定主詞：
Foreigners who live far from home and face a difficult language and culture　need a lot of help.

有些foreigners舉家遷去僑居地定居，當地的語言流利，對當地文化熟悉，但可能還是需要很多幫助。

who face a difficult language and culture due to far from home

Foreigners need a lot of help because of out of his own country, a new and strange culture and languge...