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2012-11-09 5:06 am

Good morning, everyone. Today I will have a sharing about my favorite film.It is a comedy film. It is call catch me if you can. The story is about a youngster who called Frank cheat over one hundred thousand U.S dollars by use the checks system's vulnerability and acted to be a lawyer, pilot and doctor(actually he just spend one week to study and finish the exam). Finally, his ability in Identify fraudulent checks got appreciate by Hanratty and work for Federal government.
The director of this film is Steven Allan Spielberg and the main characters are Leonardo DiCaprio and Tom Hanks.
I think the film is exciting and realistic because it is based on a real person. This movie doesn’t only hold my attention, but also help me to know that if commit crimes use in right ways, it can be successful.
If you love surprise plot, this is your movie.

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larry

2012-11-09 10:10 am

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Good morning everyone. Today I'm going to share with you my favourite flm, which is a comedy. It is called "Catch Me If You Can". It is directed by Steven Allan Spielberg and the leading actors are Leonardo DiCaprio and Tom Hanks.The story is developed around a youth who is called Frank and is acted by Leonardo. He cheats his targets of over one hundred thousand dollars with his high intelligence and skills. He can easily find and seize the weakness of the check system and become whoever he wants to be such as lawyer, pilot and doctor. He is able to spend just one week on studying all the things about the occupation abd pass the exam. It's so amazing, isn't it? Finally, his talent which is distinguishing fake checks is appreciated by Hanrantty and he works for the Federal government.

I think the film is very exciting and realistic because it is a true story of a real person. The movie can really attract my attention and let me know that committing crime for positive purposes can be a honorable job.

I highly recommend this film to you if you like surprising and entertaining plots. This is all of my sharing. Thank you!

2012-11-09 02:12:15 補充：
the occupation "and" pass the exam
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