[翻譯英文+哄女仔問題] 如果我咁同個女仔講，佢會唔會原諒我

講道歉咁唔客氣(無論點都好係我唔啱啦)和有咁多條件(食完飯就當冇事發生過)都唔係好態度 - 最少女仔和受害人好難吞下這種講法。

要道歉就唔好咁多條件...最終是否和好要把權交給對方


I'm sorry I've lied to you that one time and caused you pain and cannot trust me any more. But I really find you worthy to be a friend and since we'll be returning to our own country soon, I don't want you feel bad. Would you forgive me and meet me for dinner/lunch?她的回覆便是原不原諒你的答案...到時食飯就唔使再道欺，反而到時你要讚賞她大量和你心裏感激她...

as i think, girls are always more easily than boys angry. luckily, make girls happy are also easy too!YOU CAN LET SHE LAUGH OR HAPPY,YOU HAVE
ALREADY WIN.here are some example:
1)send a message with a lot of 'sorry!please forgive me!please give me one more chance! sorry...........'
2)send her some 笑話 without any yellow or red things.
etc:you are the second most happy person in the world, i am the first because...................i meet/know you.
3)send a song to her, etc.無賴by 鄭中基

English translation :(have some corrections.)
我唔知道我之前咁做，會搞到你當時咁唔開心，無論點都好，果次係我唔岩
Sorry! I know that i did wrongly before and you many, that is all my fault! i am very sorry!
我唔應該講大話，仲令到你地咁失望。
i shouldn't lie and make you so disappointing. i promise that i will not lie forever.
please believe me!
其實過多幾個禮拜，大家都要番番自己既國家，我真係希望大家一齊出黎食餐飯，亦都比機會我親口同你地講聲對唔住
i know that we must go back to our country later. so i want you give me a chance to let me say sorry to you and have meal together.
食完餐飯，大家就當無事發生'我唔想無左你兩位好朋友 (two friend???)
will you forgive me and give me a chance? i don't want to lose a kind-heart and great friend such as you.
I am very sorry!!will you forgive me and give me a chance?


Hope i can help you!

2012-11-08 17:38:23 補充：
correction:
eng trans
Sorry! I know that i did wrongly before and HURT you many, that is all my fault! i am very sorry!

i am terribly sorry to what i did for you. coming couple weeks we might need to back home. I really do not want to loss you two friend of mine. anyway, i hope to say sorry in person and meals with you.