英文grammer 開始 句子

I have to give my special thanks to my English teacher.
He is the one who encourage me to try to study and improve my English.
He had many interests,such as drawing,cooking,and gardening.
Last summer he invited us to his Sheung Shui Country Villas.
He owned the Tsui Lai Country Garden also.
He showed us a lot of Fine Arts.
He showed us how to make a work of art by a sketch first.
He then painted a picture in watercolours.
He also used a special can of spray paint!
He paints a wide variety of themes on cooking and gardening only!
He had won the International watercolour painting on "The Sheung Shui Scenery" only last year!
Sometimes I ever thought that he could be an Art teacher too.

(A sentence is a set of words expressing a statment or an order,usually containing a subject and a verb;attitude towards it is also important.)

糾正一下一些錯誤
grammar 不是grammer
English 不是english
He had...
如果他一直都有那些興趣就應該用has了
interests..因為有多過1個興趣
Sometimes..這字解作"有時"的時候是有s的
suit解作"相配"的時候後面直接來個名詞就可..不用加"to"
不過應該是Art teacher suits him才是這字的用法...可以句子不太流暢
所以我應該改做that it is suitable for him to be a Art teacher.
不用加too..因為你之前沒提及過有個老師都適合當Art teacher

還有什麼想我補充的話請你補充問題0.0"

2012-11-07 01:30:29 補充：
He is the one who takes
effort to encouage me to improve my englsih.
我想改成
He (is the one who) puts a lot of effort on me to improve my English
is the one who 有括號是因為可有可無
當你只是想強調他是唯一一個鼓勵你學英文的人就不用刪掉