麻烦帮我修正一下以下对话的文法和句子结构:]

介紹你一個我最常去的免費視訊網站

裡面的辣妹真的是超級正的!!

最大的重點是→加入會員是免費的

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而且加入後馬上可以找你喜歡的妹陪你聊天

甚至看"特別的秀"……

而且她們真的都很配合，感覺就像自己的女朋友一樣

如果你有興趣的話，跟你推薦我心目中的排行榜



正妹視訊聊天評比【第一名】分秒精彩 《值得觀看指數：100%》

"""""我跟我麻吉都很喜歡她""""""

她敢秀的程度絕對超乎你的想像!!

保證分分秒秒都精彩!!


通常她的包廂都是大家擠破頭的
22:00-05:00這時間都有機會遇到她
配合度超高的，認識她的都知道
就好像自己的女朋友一樣~~



正妹視訊聊天評比【第二名】小巧可人 《值得觀看指數：95%》

如果當她正眼看著你的時候…

你會在電腦面前定格住…沒騙你…

她的身材超棒的! 配合度也很高，說什麼做什麼~
可愛到值回票價，真的是一次就上癮了~



正妹視訊聊天評比【第三名】親愛的丫 《值得觀看指數：90%》

她是一位大美女

可愛性感又配合

她就是有本事讓你非常開心!!!


一位很好聊表演很棒的正妹，可愛又性感是她的招牌
只要看過她一次你就會了解，為什麼我說她很有本事了



以上3位是我平常最常光顧的排行榜
不過看心情我偶爾也會找其他人聊聊天
裡面有上百位超級正妹，就算你天天看都看不完
有些真的很超級敢秀的，敢秀的程度絕對超乎你想像
這也是我主要用來舒解整天工作壓力的好方法



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No offence to anyone:

floor-length (adjective) 拖到地的 = long enough to reach the floor (only before a noun) e.g. floor-length skirt, floor-length dress

plain blouse = a blouse without anything added or decoration

full-length trousers (or pants) = tousers ~ about half an inch off the floor

2012-11-07 10:34:12 補充：
真是有這些字, floor-length dress, plain blouse, full-length trousers (pants)
我想發問者：jen****** 不是自己創的形容詞彙, 因為字典有, 我見廣告上有.

2012-11-09 09:39:35 補充：
1. A: Where are you going tonight?

2. B: I'm going to the Christmas party at Tom’s house. (I'm going to the church Christmas party.)

3. A: What a coincidence! I'm going there too.

4. B: What are you wearing?

5. A: I like elegant style. So I think I will wear a floor-length dress and high-heeled shoes.

6. B: I think sexy style is better than elegant style. So I'm going to wear a vest and a miniskirt.

7. A: There is a big difference in our choice of dress style!

8. B: Right. What do you think Sandy and Mandy will wear?

9. A: I think they will wear the same style clothes, such as a plain blouse and full-length trousers.

10. B: Oh! I think so, too.

11. A: Well, see you tonight!

Comment:
Sentence 1. Where do you want to go? 這樣問好像A和B一起外出,A問B想去什麼地方? 提議這句子要改,因為要在 tense 和意識上 match B的回答(第二句子)

Sentence 2. 單是 mention Christmas party不夠, A要知道是那個 Christmas party 才可以第三句回答 What a coincidence! 發覺他們大家同時去同一個 party.

Sentence 4. What are you wearing? 比較 casual 簡短問法 (適合spoken English)

Sentence 10.There is a comma, after so. You won’t notice it in conversation.

希望盡可能保持作者原意. Spoken English 结构比較簡短

如果要按大體的對話內容來更正/更改或許如下： A: Do you have any plan for tonight? B: I’m going to the Christmas Party at Wendy’s. [意思是在Wendy家或由Wendy作主人家的party.] A: What a coincidence, me too. B: What will you wear? A: I like to be elegant, so I’m going to wear an evening gown (or long dress) with high heels. B: Oh, I rather be sexy for the occasion, so I’m going to wear tube top and miniskirt. A: Wow, our preference is quite different! B: Well, that’s fine. Everyone should be able to choose their own style. A: Yes, of course. So see to tonight, then. B: Sure, I’ll see you. Bye for now.

2012-11-05 17:51:27 補充：
你需要讀多一些真正的英文書來學習真正的寫法，而不要「以為」詞/字便是同一個意思：例

1. dress up是隆而重之，花技招展，不是穿著甚麼。

2. a floor-length dress…我未見過floor-length來形容一種裙

3. high heels英語已經是一款鞋種，所以不會加shoes，或者high-heeled形容鞋。

4. plain blouse我想是你創的形容詞彙吧？full-length trousers (除了串字錯外)亦沒這寫法，是否有人會穿half-length, knee-length, 3/4 length trousers。

A: Where do you want to go tonight?

B:I'm going to the church christmas party.

A:What a coincidence! I'm going too.

B:What do you want to dress up?

A:I like elegant style. So I think will wear full dress and a high-heeled shoes.

B: I feel sexy style better than elegant. So I'm going to wear vest and miniskirt.

A: There is a big difference between our dresses !

B: Right. What do you think Sandy and Mandy will wear?

A: I think they will wear the same style , such as plain blouse and trouses.

B:Oh! I think that too.

A:Well,see you tonight!

B:Bye.

A: where do you want to go tonight?

B: I'm going to the christmas party. ( 定冠詞 required )

A: What a coincidence ! I'm going to there too. (介詞 not required )

B: what do you dress up? What are you going to wear ? (or) How are you going to dress up? (present simple tense not suitable , unless you go to a party everyday )

A: I like elegant style. So I think I’ll wear a floor full-length dress and a high-heeled shoes. ( shoes – plural, cannot use ‘a’ )

B: I feel prefer sexy style to elegant style. So I'm going to wear a vest and a miniskirt.

A: There is a big gap in our dress style! Our dress styles don’t really match !

B: Right. What do you think Sandy and Mandy will dress wear ?

A: I think they will dress up will be wearing matching styles, such as a plain blouse and full-length trousers.

B: Oh! I think that so too.

A: Well, see you tonight!

B: Bye.

----Error and correction on conversational grammar.Conversations are informal chatting on colloquial communication. As long as you have the "dialogue" and exchange of views , it's okay:-------
B;- I'm going to Christmas par(ty).
A:- What a coincidence I'm going (--) there too.
A:- a (pair) of high-heeled shoes.
B:- will dress (up) ?
A:- ....an(d) full-length trous(er)s.