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WAI, is an atmosphere
being alone in the darkness
with heart as calm as static water

WAI, a kind of feeling
people and memories and stuffs that are held in my heart

WAI, the emotion
I miss
the faded colour of the shadow
facing unknowns in the future

WAI, the quietness in my heart
back to the origin
and then
back to the truth

2012-11-02 21:56:17 補充：
In the bustle of the world,
What are you searching?
You, or me?
Others, or yourself?
There are too many games and rules and punishments and reward
but then, YOU
What have you chosen?
What have you gained?
You Win, or you Lose?
Everyone started wandering...

2012-11-02 22:03:32 補充：
We wander,
so that we can
find back the place
that belongs to us
The world may become multicolored
still we want to find it back
the origin
the white

We wander
but we won't surrender
No matter how big the world is
we choose to believe
Ourself

Wai is a kind of sesational scene that is situated by itself and among the dark as calm as the stagnant water.
Wai is a kind of emotion from heart within which contains people,affairs and matters.
Wai is a kind of feeling's thoughtfulness with faded colourful background and without forseen future.
Wai is a kind of safety that everything returns to its original conditions.
In this busily clamorous world, where you are chasing yourself or myself? Is it someone else or I myself?
As in this world there are too much regulations, games,rewards and punishments. As to you what is your choices? What have you got? Did you win? Did you lose ? We had better to be wandering.

In order to returning to our place which belonged we continue to wander.
Though the "world" become full of different colours and yet we still need to return to the place that being belonged by us.
Whereas we are wandering but we never get lost even though the world is big enough we still be loyal to ourselves.

WAI, is a kind of artistic conception
Alone in the dark
Hearts, static, such as water
WAI, is the kind of feeling
Inside the store
People and events
WAI, a temper
MissFaded back
Unknown future
WAI, is a security
Reverse Park
And then
The best retort.

In this noisy and annoying "world"
Search
Are you or I?
Are others or yourself?
World
Too many rules, too many games too much too much of the award based
punishment
And you
Choose what?
Get what?
WINS?
Still lost?
We had choose Street

Street
Located in order to
Really belong to us
Local.
Live "world"
Become colorful
We still want to recover
Original
The white.
We stray
But we are not confused
World largest
We still choose
Loyal to the
Themselves.

Pregnant, is a mood
Alone in the dark
Heart and static
Pregnant, is a feeling
Heart store
People and things and objects
Pregnant, is a kind of emotional
Miss
Fade back
Unknown future
Pregnant, is a kind of stability
Reverting
Then
Simplicity.

In the hustle and bustle of the world
Sought
It was you or me?
Others or yourself?
World
Too many games with too many rules reward too many penalties
And you
What?
Get what?
Won?
Or lose?
We, choose a stray.

Rangers
In order to go and look back
Really belong to us
Place.
Instant "world"
Becomes colorful
We still want to get back
That initial
White.
We stray
But we are not confused
World again
We still choose
Loyal to
Themselves.

WAI, Is a kind of artistic conceptionAlone in the darkHearts, static, such as water, Is a kind of feelingInside the storePeople and events, Is a kind of emotionMissFade backUnknown future, Is a stableReverse ParkThenRetort.
The vexation of the "world"SearchAre either you or I?Are others or yourself?WorldToo many rules, too many games too much too much of the award based punishmentAnd youChoose what?Get what?WINS?Still lost?We had choose Street.
StreetLocated in order toReally belong to usLocal.Live "world"Become colorfulWe still want to recoverOriginalThe white.We strayBut we are not confusedWorld largestWe continue to selectLoyal to theThemselves.
, Is a kind of artistic conceptionAlone in the darkHearts, static, such as water, Is a kind of feelingInside the storePeople and events, Is a kind of emotionMissFade backUnknown future, Is a stableReverse ParkThenRetort.The vexation of the "world"SearchAre either you or I?Are others or yourself?WorldToo many rules, too many games too much too much of the award based punishmentAnd youChoose what?Get what?WINS?Still lost?We had choose Street.StreetLocated in order toReally belong to usLocal.Live "world"Become colorfulWe still want to recoverOriginalThe white.We strayBut we are not confusedWorld largestWe continue to selectLoyal to theThemselves.

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