請幫我修改以下的英文段落!謝謝!

2012-10-26 10:03 pm
1.在潮濕或有水的地方沒有使用防水燈具。
2.安裝調光器時,但沒有同時使用調光的鎮流器或驅動器。
3.在酷熱或嚴寒的地方下。
4.將有關組件或線路錯誤地接駁。
5.產品遭受人為破壞。
6.該地方存有化學品的侵蝕。
7.先要確定有問題的產品非人為破壞或非不當使用產品,本公司才接納壞貨更換的申請。
8.有現貨供應的產品,並提供免費送貨服務。
9.我們會安排退回產品作相關維修服務,如產品不能維修,便更換一個全新的物品。
10.工程如未能按合約指定期內完成,承辦商須向XXX賠償確定之損失每日300港幣元,直至工程圓滿結束為止。
11.貴公司有否提供其它品牌的配件,或者安裝服務嗎?例如:電子鎮流器或光管。
12.而且,我們建議放置「小心地滑」警示牌。
13.我們會協助編制以下指引以供職員使用:

回答 (2)

2012-10-27 5:24 am
✔ 最佳答案
Idiomatic expressions on your 13 English Paragraphs (sentences)must be well-phrased (errors and corrections) or idiot upon me by again losing 50 marks!
(1)Do not use in damp, despite water-proof.
(2)When installing a dimmer,mind the ballastic drive!
(3)Under very hot or cold place.
(4)Wiring components incorrectly connected.
(5)Subject to vandalism.
(6)Erosion of local chemical.
(7)Replace if NOT improper use.
(8)Shelf products available,offer free delivery.
(9)Repair maintenance service or replacement.
(10)Unfulfiled contract,contractor may compensate $300 till finished.
(11)Spare parts eg,e-ballasts or light tubes?
(12)"slip floor" warning signs.
(13)Guidelines for the staff !
To deduct 50 marks from me!
2012-10-27 2:38 am
1 where moisture or water is not waterproof lamps.
2. Install dimmer, but did not use both dimming ballasts or drive.
Hot or cold place.
The relevant components or wiring incorrectly connected.
5. Suffered vandalism.
6 that place there are chemical attack.
Must be sure that the problem of non-human to undermine or non improper use of the product, the company before accepting bad goods replacement application.
8 shelf products, and offer free shipping.
We will arrange to return the product for a related maintenance services, such as the product can not be repaired, they replace a brand-new items.
10 projects, such as the failure to press the contractually specified period completed, a contractor to the XXX compensation determined loss Daily HK $ 300, until the work is satisfactory end.
11 Does your company have any other brand accessories or installation services? For example: electronic ballasts or fluorescent tubes.
12. Moreover, we recommend to place "Carefully slide the warning signs.
13 We will assist in the preparation of guidelines for the use of the staff:


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