一個句子的That連接詞可重複使用?

2012-10-22 10:28 am
"You must do the things today that others will not do so that you can have the things tomorrow that others will not have."

我發現這句話裡頭 一共使用了三個相同的連接詞That
如果我不想使用連接詞That
請問這段話 我該如何書寫? (可以分成句或三句)

回答 (7)

2012-10-22 12:02 pm
✔ 最佳答案
這句話不想用三個 that,不需拆成多句也能辦到。只要把 the things that 改成 what 就省下兩個。 中間的 so that 是「以便」,這個 that 若不想用,則必須用另外的連接詞。另外,假如覺得 so that 太過普通,可以用任何一種表示後果的說法來取代。 例如:

You must do today what others will not do, hoping that tomorrow you can have what others will not have.

You must do today what others will not do, with the hope that tomorrow you may have what others will not have.

Do today what others will not do, and tomorrow you may have what others will not have.
2012-10-22 6:10 pm
Finishing what they left off today, you will something for tomorrow while they have nothing.

2012-10-22 10:12:28 補充:
"you will have" instead of "will something"
2012-10-22 5:29 pm
You must do the things today that others will not do so that you can have the things tomorrow that others will not have.

三個that, 只有so that是連接詞, 另兩個是關代.

2012-10-22 09:34:07 補充:
更動最少的改寫:
You must do today what others will not do and you can have tomorrow what others
will not have.
2012-10-22 5:29 pm
You must do today what others will not do,in other words, you can have tomorrow what others will not have.--------
2012-10-22 5:25 pm
She who does what others don't will have what others wont - prisoner @ 26535.

I would say the the the the the the melon was mean...
2012-10-22 4:34 pm
You must be willing to do the things today others don't do in order to have the things tomorrow others won't have. ---- Les Brown
2012-10-22 11:04 am
If 3 "that" are too many, then look at this sentence:

I would say that that that that that boy wrote in that that clause was wrong.


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