I visited ICAC Headquarters Building last Friday. I arrived at the building at 10:30am last Friday. Then I showed security guard ICAC invitation letter. Afterwards I
took a lift to the second floor of the building. There were many offices on the
floor.
(係二樓其實一直以黎直至現在都有好多辦公室，咁我用過去式岩唔岩呀。)
English composition
2012-10-21 8:42 pm
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2012-10-21 8:53 pm
✔ 最佳答案
You should use present tense becuse the statement is still trueAlso there are too many 'last Friday's (Well this is not a big problem)
It should be 'my ICAC invitation letter'
Suggested correction:
I visited ICAC Headquarters Building last Friday. I arrived at the building at 10:30am. Then I showed security guard my ICAC invitation letter. Afterwards I
took a lift to the second floor of the building. There are many offices on the
floor.
2012-10-31 11:06 am
I visited ICAC's Headquarters Building last Friday. I arrived at the building at 10:30am last Friday. Then I showed security guard their invitation letter. Afterwards I took a lift to the second floor of the building. There were many offices on that floor.
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