見工時既問題點答好?

Good morning Sir /Madam or Good afternoon Sir/Madam
May I introduce myself, my name is Wong Chee-Tak and graduated in Yee Ming High School in 2009; after that I studied English in the evening school for one year. In order to earn my living, I had been working for two years as assistant cook in Fu Kee Restaurant since 2010; as a matter of fact, my ideal occupation is electronics, owing to that reason, I would like to apply for the post of assistant in your company/shop.
Regarding my characters, I'm obedient, energetic, honest, reliable, responsible, accountable, co-operate, sympathetic,considerate,and enthusiastic. If I were appointed for being the assistant, I will do my best to perform the duties as required.
Thank you for giving me the opportunity of interview and would like to hear from you for the result. Thank you very much.

我就唔想做廚房..大事節日都要係廚房做死,人人都黎食野自己又要開工
人工又唔係高,又容易受傷,又熱,又多油

做廚房點會走去賣電器﹖你懂嗎﹖你答咗呢個問題先諗﹗