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orignally!! If (e.g. on the morning -> in the morning ) is OK !!!
My best friend
Hello! Let me introduce my best friend ---- Natalie. We had already known each other for about 3 years ago. I remembered I knew her in Primary 4, I didn’t know her before, because she was the first year to study in this school. At that time, because I am talkative in group, so my class teacher Ms. Chan changed my seat to Natalie’s group, and it’s the time that we met together, also Victoria and Jamie.
So we always play in the recess and all the activities we always join together until now too! As the time past, I knew more about her and became the best friend, she like green color, reading novel and her marks are as well as some peoples who got high marks. Also, she is polite all the time, when she is angry, she will not bad-humored, she just say “Remember to do the things!”. And she is honest girl, she wasn’t lying in her teeth!
I was very lucky to have this reliable best friend, Ihope I can study and play with her anytime. And I can’t imagine a world without Natalie. Thanks god, you gave me the best friend!
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2012-10-14 6:55 am
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2012-10-28 2:00 pm
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My best friendHello! Let me introduce my best friend ---- Natalie. We had already known each other for about 3 years . I remembered I met her in Primary 4, I didn’t know her before, because she was the first year to study in this school. At that time, because I am talkative in class, so my teacher Ms. Chan changed my seat to Natalie’s side , and it’s the time that we met together, also Victoria and Jamie.
Then we often played together after class. As the time past, I knew more about her and became the best friend, she liked green color, reading novel and her marks are as well as some peoples who got high marks. Also, she was polite , when she was angry and would not have bad temper; she just said “Remember to do the things!”. And she was an honest girl, she wasn’t lying in her teeth!
I was very lucky to have this reliable best friend, I hoped that I could study and play with her anytime. And I couldn’t imagine a world without Natalie. Thanks god, who gave me the best friend!
2012-10-26 4:51 am
My best friend
Hello! Let me introduce my best friend ---- Natalie. We has already known each other for about 3 years ago. I remember I knew her in Primary 4, I haven't known her before, because she was the first year to study in this school. At that time, because I am talkative in the group, so my class teacher Ms. Chan changed my seat to Natalie’s group, and it’s the time that we met together, also Victoria and Jamie.
So we always play in the recess and all the activities we always join together until now too! As the time past, I knew more about her and she became my best friend, her favourite colour is green, ans her hobby is reading novels and her academic results are always on the highest. Also, she is polite all the time, when she is angry, she will control herself and being good-tempted to me,.She is also a honest girl, she wasn’t lying in her teeth!
I was very lucky to have this reliable best friend, I hope I can study and play with her always. To be serious,I just can’t imagine how I led a life without Natilie. Thanks God, you gave me my dearest best friend!
Hello! Let me introduce my best friend ---- Natalie. We has already known each other for about 3 years ago. I remember I knew her in Primary 4, I haven't known her before, because she was the first year to study in this school. At that time, because I am talkative in the group, so my class teacher Ms. Chan changed my seat to Natalie’s group, and it’s the time that we met together, also Victoria and Jamie.
So we always play in the recess and all the activities we always join together until now too! As the time past, I knew more about her and she became my best friend, her favourite colour is green, ans her hobby is reading novels and her academic results are always on the highest. Also, she is polite all the time, when she is angry, she will control herself and being good-tempted to me,.She is also a honest girl, she wasn’t lying in her teeth!
I was very lucky to have this reliable best friend, I hope I can study and play with her always. To be serious,I just can’t imagine how I led a life without Natilie. Thanks God, you gave me my dearest best friend!
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