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2012-10-12 7:02 am
The movie took place at an university of Engineering in India. Just by coincidence, Farhan, Raju and Rancho studied in the same college so as to get a degree on engineering. The three of them became friends as they shared the same room. However, students in the schools always compete with each other and the only focused on academic results. Rancho was a great engineering genius. He thought that students should not be spoon-fed since everyone has got their own critical thinking. Therefore, he kept challenging Viru which is the most egocentric person in the school. Seeing that Rancho could make use of a vacuum cup to help deliver a baby, Professor Viru finally agreed with Rancho and gave him the valuable pen.

In this movie, we see that Rancho has got his own idea which is unique. He refused to accept spoon-feeding education. He tried different methods in order to change the professors’ mind. Although he had faced barriers and depression like being offended by the professor, he still insisted on his own theory and tried his best to convince them. At the end of the story, he finally succeed and become an expert on engineering.

Rancho is my favourite character. Every time when he was facing problems, he would tell himself that ‘All is well’. Although the situation cannot be changed, it can strengthen our courage. He never escapes from challenges and try to adapt it.

After listening to my sharing, I sincerely hope that the story can inspire all of you to have a flexible attitude when facing difficulties. Keep remind ourselves not to escape from problems but try to adapt them.

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2012-10-12 5:29 pm
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1. However, students in the schools always competed with each other and they only focused on academic results.

2. Therefore, he kept challenging Viru, who is the most egocentric person in the school.

3. At the end of the story, he finally succeeded and became an expert on engineering.

4. He never escaped from challenges but tried to adapt it.

5. After sharing my view, I sincerely hope that...

6. Keep reminding ourselves not to escape from problems but try to resolve them.


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