French Writing: Help it check it, plzzz?

2012-09-21 5:12 pm
__French___:
J'ai un ami qui partage les même passe-temp comme je le fais.
Il s'appelle Mike Lee. Il est quatorze ans et il vient de hong kong.
Il est grand avec les cheveux noirs et raides et les yeux noirs. Il aussi a un petit nez et est très mince.
Nous la fois aimons écouter la musique. Son bande préférons est '' Sabaton''.
Pendant le week-end, Il aime jouer tambours, écouter la musique et chanter.
Je pense il est très drôle et je suis content avoir Mike être mon ami.

___The English Meaning___:
I have a friend who shares the same hobby as I do.
His name is Mike Lee. He is fourteen years old and he comes from hong kong.
He is tall with straight black hair and black eyes. He also has a small nose and is very thin.
We both love listening to music. His favorite band is ''Sabaton''.
During the weekend, he likes to play drums, listen to music and to sing.
I think he is very funny and I'm happy to have Mike to be my friend.

@@@@ People, please check the french writing for me, if there is any wrong , please give the SIMPLE correct answer , i dont want any DIFFICULT words. THANKS~~~

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