請高手指教:英檢中級翻譯

2012-09-19 1:12 am
>>自己的練習(中翻英),請教各位高手,是否可以指教一下,
有什麼地方的用語需要修改會更好.
謝謝.


小時候,我和鄰居John同校。那時我們常一起打籃球,度過許多快樂時光。畢業以後,他和家人移居到國外。從此我們就失去連絡了。

when I was a child , I and my neighbor John were in the same school .
we used to play basketball together at that time , and had much of happy time .
after graduated , he moved abroad with his family . we lost the connection since then.

回答 (2)

2012-09-19 1:45 am
✔ 最佳答案
When I was a child, my neighbor John and I were in the same school.

We used to play basketball together at that time, and had a lot of fun.

After graduating, he moved abroad with his family.

We have been out of contact with each other since then.


I通常不放在第一個
逗點前面不須空格,逗點後才要
玩得很開心用have a lot of fun
分詞構句要分清楚是主動還是被動,自己畢業要用ing型態
失去聯絡用be out of contact with sb
有再連絡用keep in touch/contact

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2012-09-19 7:33 pm
As a kid, I and neighbor John school. Then we often play basketball together, and spent many happy hours. After graduation, he and his family emigrated to foreign countries. And here we lost contact.



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