grammer

It would be more reasonable to check out your grammertically mistake in the following written sentence and it has been amended again..




* On the first day of school, my teacher who named John in my class, said that he wanted student to enjoy the school life and he would like to welcome us to get to school since my classmates and I were the new students as if we lived in the big family. Afterwards, a boy who sat on the table and chatted up so loudly with another classmates in the classroom and he has been blamed for his rumble by John and he had been even told to call his parents to see John.

On the openning day of school. All students are gathering in the Hall and listened to teacher's addresses; "Welcome to school, we're in the big family!" the teacher said. And afterwards, students are sitting on the tables in the classroom, then one of them spoke; "Yes, school is our big family isn't it".
Then,teacher shouted; "No. you can't pretending school is your home?" and " call your parents to see me!". she said:

Trying to edit it a bit since your original one doesn't sound too right.


At the first day of school, my teacher said "welcome to our big family", hoping students enjoy their school lives. But later, when boys talked during class at their desks, my teacher shouted at them, "Do you think you are at home now? I need to see your parents!" (49 words)