plz help me to correct the grammer mis, but i hope that it should be in 50 words:
At the first day of school. Wanting student to enjoy schoo life, theacher will say'
welcome to school, we're in the big family!' afterward, boys sitting on the table,
speaking in the class. teacher then shout' are you pretending the school as your
home? call your parent to see me!'
grammer
2012-09-07 6:39 am
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2012-09-08 4:00 pm
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At the first school day, the teacher will say, 'Welcome back to school, we're in a big family!', wanting student to enjoy schoo life. Afterwards, boys sit on the table, chatting in the class. The teacher will then shout, 'Do you think your school is your home so that you can chat whenever you want? Call your parent to see me!'
參考: me
2012-09-07 8:59 am
-----The errors and corrections of the grammatical mistakes---------
--------Hoping the students to enjoy school life on the first school day, the teacher would propose a welcome to students to the big family.
-------Afterwards when boys were sitting on tables and talking in class,the teacher would shout whether they were pretending the sc as their home,and called for parents to come,saying,"In the classroom,I can assert my authority on you!".
--------Hoping the students to enjoy school life on the first school day, the teacher would propose a welcome to students to the big family.
-------Afterwards when boys were sitting on tables and talking in class,the teacher would shout whether they were pretending the sc as their home,and called for parents to come,saying,"In the classroom,I can assert my authority on you!".
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