拜託幫我檢查英文段落的文法~謝謝!!

你好 請參考 拜託幫我檢查英文段落的文法~謝謝!!Wind turbines are very noisy and we do not like the appearance, as well as in case of no wind can not be normal generation, so I want to wind turbines placed in the sparsely populated, and whether it is day or night four seasons windplace, will be able to solve the problem. This place is near the coast, I believe that this solution will accept.原文:
關於風力發電機的問題是很吵雜和外觀上大家都不喜歡,還有萬一沒有風的話就無法正常發電,所以我想把風力發電機放置在人煙稀少,並且不管是白天或晚上四季都有風的地方,就能解決問題了。而這個地方就是海岸附近,我相信這個解決方法大家都會接受的。 這是我改的:Wind turbines are noisy and the appearances of them don’t please us. Also that if there is no wind, then it would not generate. Therefore, I wish to have them installed to a place where people are very few, in which there will be no problem days and night in all four seasons. This place is around the coast, and I believe everyone will agree with this decision.

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2012-08-31 21:20:00 補充：
抱歉nights才對!

2012-08-31 23:37:42 補充：
To Prisoner
Do you attend Sunday school where they teach American-born Chinese
Chinese?
It seems that you don't understand the OP's Chinese thread saying.

2012-08-31 23:38:46 補充：
給發問的人
意見欄那位人說的未必正確
她只是隨便照她意思翻
你還是參考我的就好

2012-09-01 01:35:50 補充：
004又錯了
是海邊附近
不是海邊上
你要加around.

因為中文寫的就不是結構完整，再用翻譯機處理就更肢離破碎。

關於風力發電機的問題是很吵雜和外觀上大家都不喜歡,還有萬一沒有風的話就無法正常發電,
Wind turbines are noisy and the unsightly structures don't appeal to the public. More importantly, it needs wind to generate electricity.


所以我想把風力發電機放置在人煙稀少,並且不管是白天或晚上四季都有風的地方,就能解決問題了。
So, I think the ideal location for Wind Trubine is in a remote area, where there's wind blowing, day and night, all year round.


而這個地方就是海岸附近,我相信這個解決方法大家都會接受的。
And the solution for this, which I believe will gain acceptance from general public, is in the coastal area.

2012-09-01 02:01:03 補充：
更正:

Wind turbines are noisy and the unsightly structures don't appeal to the public. More importantly, they need wind to generate electricity.

You saw Chinglish and let me show you real good English writing:

Three concerns of windmills are, its noises, its appearances, and its dependency on the local air movement. Proper placement of the windmills might be able to alleviate these concerns.

2012-08-31 23:08:15 補充：
One location comes to mind immediately is the ample coastline available in TW. With proper design and careful installation, these windmills could even become tourist attraction.

2012-08-31 23:31:28 補充：
Dude,
I like windmills - I can sit around the hill at Palm Spring (CA) and watch those windmills pretending to be Don Quixote whole day.

Wind turbines are very noisy and people do not like their appearance. What's more, if there is no wind , they can not work very well.So in my opinion, wind turbines should be put the place where few people pass by , and wind always blows around whether it is day or night in four seasons . Thus, those problems will be solved. Clearly, the best place is near the coast then I believe that everyone can accept this suggestion.

as well as in case of no wind can not be normal generation, (And when there is no wind, it can't have a)

so I want to wind turbines placed in the sparsely populated, (the wind turbines to be placed in a sparsely populated area).

and whether it is day or night four seasons windplace, . (And in a place where there is wind day and night and all year round)

will be able to solve the problem (So where is the place that we can solve the problems?)


This place is near the coast, I believe that this solution will accept.

I believe this proposal will be accepted.

原文:
關於風力發電機的問題是很吵雜和外觀上大家都不喜歡,還有萬一沒有風的話就無法正常發電,所以我想把風力發電機放置在人煙稀少,並且不管是白天或晚上四季都有風的地方,就能解決問題了。而這個地方就是海岸附近,我相信這個解決方法大家都會接受