Please proofread this sentence

2012-08-28 11:53 pm
This watch can measure the time for a car to travel between two places.

Is that correct??

回答 (2)

2012-08-29 4:07 am
✔ 最佳答案
Theoretically and grammatically, it is correct.
However, it is too clumsy.
Therefore, I recommend you using this sentence instead:
This watch can measure the travelling time of a car.
You don't need 'between two places'.
參考: me
2012-08-29 2:09 am
There are many ways to express your meaning.

One of them could be
This watch can measure the time that a car requires to travel between two places.


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