Over the past few years, the indiscretion of some of the artists were reported on entertainment magazines. It lead to a hot debate among society on whether the behavior of public figures should be more continent or they are just as same as other people, they have their own right to do everything that others can do. It seems to me that being a public figure, his/her conduct should be well as they are the idol of many teenagers.
Two years ago, artists Edison, who had taken some photos with famous female artists which are considered indecent. Unluckily, these photos were obtained by entertainment journalists in an inappropriate way. They then showed out all the photos on the magazines. Countless heart of teenagers must be hurt deeply. Many of the young are enchanted by the good appearance or the inner beauty of their beloved artists in a certain extents. When they suddenly know that the private life of their idols is completely different with that they use to show in front of public. The young are still so green that they could not handle with such setback. They will feel confused and annoyed. Some of them may even feel that what their idol do must be right and then follow suit blindingly. In order to protect the young who are not mature enough to distinguish which is right and wrong, artists have to take the responsibility of being a role model to behave well consistently in front of others and behind the public so as to instill correct beliefs and knowledge to teenagers.
To conclude, as a public figure, what you do is paid attention by many people. Your behavior will directly influence ones growth, especially the young generation. Therefore, being a responsible artist, please think twice before you do anything.
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2012-08-25 12:54 am
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2012-08-25 4:35 pm
Over the past few years, the indiscretion of some of the artists were reported on entertainment magazines. 1)Opinions are split on whether the behavior of public figures should be more continent. It seems to me that being a public figure, his/her conduct should be 2)good as they are the 3)idols of many teenagers.
Two years ago, 4)artist Edison, who had taken some photos with famous female artists which are considered indecent. Unluckily, these photos were obtained by entertainment journalists in an inappropriate way. They then 5)showed all the photos on the magazines. 6)Countless hearts of teenagers must be hurt deeply. Many of the 7)youngsters are enchanted by the good appearance or the inner beauty of their beloved artists 8)to a certain extent. When they suddenly know that the private 9)lives of their idols is completely different 9)from 10)what they 11)used to show in front of 12)the public. The 13)youngsters are still so green that they could not handle with such 14)a setback. They will feel confused and annoyed. Some of them may even feel that what their idol do must be right and then follow 15)them blindingly. In order to protect the 16)youngsters who are not mature enough to distinguish which is right and wrong, artists have to take the responsibility of being a role model to behave well consistently in front of others and behind the public so as to instill correct beliefs and knowledge to teenagers.
To conclude, as a public figure, 17)the public is always paying attention to your behavior. Your behavior will directly influence 18)one's growth, especially the young generation. Therefore, being a responsible artist, please think twice before you do anything.
Two years ago, 4)artist Edison, who had taken some photos with famous female artists which are considered indecent. Unluckily, these photos were obtained by entertainment journalists in an inappropriate way. They then 5)showed all the photos on the magazines. 6)Countless hearts of teenagers must be hurt deeply. Many of the 7)youngsters are enchanted by the good appearance or the inner beauty of their beloved artists 8)to a certain extent. When they suddenly know that the private 9)lives of their idols is completely different 9)from 10)what they 11)used to show in front of 12)the public. The 13)youngsters are still so green that they could not handle with such 14)a setback. They will feel confused and annoyed. Some of them may even feel that what their idol do must be right and then follow 15)them blindingly. In order to protect the 16)youngsters who are not mature enough to distinguish which is right and wrong, artists have to take the responsibility of being a role model to behave well consistently in front of others and behind the public so as to instill correct beliefs and knowledge to teenagers.
To conclude, as a public figure, 17)the public is always paying attention to your behavior. Your behavior will directly influence 18)one's growth, especially the young generation. Therefore, being a responsible artist, please think twice before you do anything.
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2012-08-25 2:42 pm
Over the past few years, the indiscretion of some of the artists were reported on entertainment magazines. It led to a hot debate among society on whether the behavior of public imagesshould be more continent or they were just as same as other people, they had their own right to do everything that others could do. It seemed to me that being a public image, his/her conduct should be good enough as they were the idols of many teenagers.
Two years ago, artists Edison, who had taken some photos with famous female artists that were considered indecent. Unfortunately, these photos were obtained by entertainment journalists in an inappropriate way. They then published all the photos on the magazines. And that broke the teenagers' heart deeply. As many of them were enchanted by the good appearance or the inner beauty of their beloved artists to a certain extent. When they suddenly knew that the private life of their idols was completely different from what the artists usually shown themselves in the public. They were still too young to face such setback. They might feel confused and annoyed. Some of them might even feel that what their idols done ought to be right and then followed blindly. In order to protect them from being misled, artists had the responsibility of being a public image and to behave consistently in front and behind the public so as to instill correct beliefs and knowledge into teenagers.
To conclude, as a public image, what you do was being observed by many people. Your behavior would directly influence one's character, especially the young generation. Therefore, being a responsible artist, please thought twice before you do anything.
Two years ago, artists Edison, who had taken some photos with famous female artists that were considered indecent. Unfortunately, these photos were obtained by entertainment journalists in an inappropriate way. They then published all the photos on the magazines. And that broke the teenagers' heart deeply. As many of them were enchanted by the good appearance or the inner beauty of their beloved artists to a certain extent. When they suddenly knew that the private life of their idols was completely different from what the artists usually shown themselves in the public. They were still too young to face such setback. They might feel confused and annoyed. Some of them might even feel that what their idols done ought to be right and then followed blindly. In order to protect them from being misled, artists had the responsibility of being a public image and to behave consistently in front and behind the public so as to instill correct beliefs and knowledge into teenagers.
To conclude, as a public image, what you do was being observed by many people. Your behavior would directly influence one's character, especially the young generation. Therefore, being a responsible artist, please thought twice before you do anything.
2012-08-25 2:05 am
(1) a lot of grammatical mistakes;the four major ones being:-
-----public figure should be more contingent (adj) upon the public's request.
-----teenagers are enchanted by their artists to a certain extent.
-----Fans try to copy role model because they admire them.
-----What you do may be paying attention to many fans.
(2)Grammar is the rule by which words change their forms and are combined into sentences.
-----public figure should be more contingent (adj) upon the public's request.
-----teenagers are enchanted by their artists to a certain extent.
-----Fans try to copy role model because they admire them.
-----What you do may be paying attention to many fans.
(2)Grammar is the rule by which words change their forms and are combined into sentences.
2012-08-25 12:58 am
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