作文時遇到的問題,希望各位大神可以提出一些意見

2012-08-18 7:42 pm

救命啊!!!這些作文的深度太高了,我完全沒有靈感...
希望各位大神可以幫我提出一些意見,我不會太貪心要你們把題目做好,就只希望你們可以提出意見而已.....

1.(我自己已經作好了)

2.Your sister was bullied by the other students in a tutorial centre. However, the tutors there simply ignored what they saw. In about 250 words, write a letter to the supervisor of the centre to complain about it. Make sure that you give details of the incident and reasons for your suggestions.

3.Something unexpected happened on your birthday last week. In about 250 words, writes a story to describe what happened on that day and how you felt about it.

4.You are a reporter for the school magazine. In about 250 words, write an article about English activity that was held recently. Make the article interesting and give it a title.

5. You are the chairperson of the Students' Union. The principal has asked you to deliver a speech to your schoolmates in the morning assembly on the first school day of the next academic year (3rd September). In about 250 words, write you speech. You may talk about anything you like.

回答 (1)

TOMING88

2012-08-18 8:58 pm

✔ 最佳答案

(2) The bullied complaint and suggestion only:-
The Supervisor,
Dear Sir,
--------------------------The bullied complaint and suggestion-----------------------
-----------As my sister was intimidated in your centre July-Aug, I regret to learn that your male students have dishonoured your "ied-taipo sc"tutorial centre classes for bullying and tormenting her recently with details of the incidents shown,in spite of her notification that no action were taken including seat moving.
-----------This ignorance has caused us embarassement as her exam marks falls and it is necessary for you to know the school tutorial fees for one year has been paid by us.
-----------Your teaching staffs in the matter are very unsatisfactory in giving ignorance only,and were frigtened to lost jobs. It has compelled us to insist on your sending persecuted boys out or my sister quits with repaid fees in all her three subjects.
Yours trully,
Christ Wong
(-----)
(dated--)

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