幫幫手修改英文文法:)thx

1. I will be studying Form X in XYZ Secondary School this coming September

2. Baby in the womb

3. Selection Panel / Panel of judges

Comments:I was born on X (Do you want to say your birthday or birthplace?)I'm happy to introduce myself. (you are already introducing yourself)Ihave many friends in the school (Iassume you go to a different school now. And it should bea new paragraph as this is not about your family anymore). Besidesplaying badminton (Not appropriate, you can use Besides here unless you mentioned badminton inthe last paragraph)sometimes we will do some activity (plural -> activities) for public good (公眾物品?) or public services (namethem).
My suggestions:
I am ABC and XYZ is my English name. I am now 1X years old and will be 1Y nextJune.<If any month next year, use next; if this year, use coming>. I will be studying at XYZ Secondary School thisSeptember as a Form X student.

I live in STU. Although the apartment is not big, it is cozy (舒適).I have a very good relationship with my family. My parents, me and my younger/eldersister/brother always go shopping together. Sometimes, we will go out fordinner too. I made a lot of friends at school. Me and my friends alwaysstudy and do things together. We often help each other when we havedifficulties. They are really nice people. I am an active person, so I play badminton at my leisuretime. I also like drawing and listening to the music. I took some drawingclasses last summer (given a time). These two hobbies not only allow me torelax myself but also help refining my temperament. I spend time on volunteerwork as well. My classmates and I are part of a volunteer team which sometimeswe visit elderly home or sell flags for charity organizations as fund raising.

I’m going to study in Form X in September in the XXX Secondary School.
我想表達的意思: 我將於9月就讀XXX中學的X年級。

The immature Fetus or infant.
我想表達的意思: 一個未出生的嬰兒。

Appraisal and Selection Committee or Recruitment Committee
我想表達的意思: 評選委員會。
幫我睇睇篇自我介紹(cut左d&修改already):
May I introduce myself,my name is X and my Chinese name is X. I was born on X. Being X years old .I'm now studying in Form X in September in the XXX Secondary School.
I live in X. There are X members in my family, including X and me. We often go shopping together and sometimes will dine out . I have a warm family as well as many friends in the school. And we always study and work together. We often help each other or one another when we have difficulties. They are really my good friends.

Besides playing badminton, I like drawing and listening to music. Thus, I have joined some drawing courses. And that let me felt relaxing and to refine my temperament. Also, I have joined with my classmates as volunteers,to participate some activities for public purposes.