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2012-08-05 3:35 am

可唔可以幫我替下有無錯，好似有D句子唔太順

GOOD MORNING / GOOD AFTERNOON .

MY NAME IS XXX . I AM XX YEARS OLD .

I FINISHED FORM 6 AT XXX COLLEGE .

I WAS WORKED IN XXX AS A CLEAK FOR THREE YEARS .

I AM CURRENTLY WORKING IN XXX AS A CURSTOMS SERVICE .

I WORKING IN IMPORT DEPARTMENT , MY MAIN JOB DUTIES ARE IMPORT

DOCUMENT HANDLING AND TELEPHONE HANDLING .

I THINK YOUR COMPANY WILL LEADING COMAPNY IN THE AVIATION

INDUSTRY. SO I AM HOPING TO GET AN OFFER OF YOU COMPANY .

I BELIEVE THAT MY EXPERIENCE IS HELPFUL FOR ME TO WORK IN

YOUR COMPANY .

IF I JOIN YOU COMPANY FORTUNATELY , I AM VERY CONFIDENT THAT I

AM ABLE TO HANDLE THE JOB IN YOUR COMPANY .

回答 (1)

用戶91174

2012-08-07 12:31 am

✔ 最佳答案

GOOD MORNING / GOOD AFTERNOON , MADAM/SIR .(加左稱謂)

MY NAME IS XXX . I AM XX YEARS OLD . (冇問題)

I FINISHED FORM 6 AT XXX COLLEGE . ( I graduated from XXX College 會好d)

I HAVE WORKED AT XXX AS A CLERK FOR THREE YEARS . (改左Grammar同錯字)

I AM CURRENTLY WORKING AT XXX AS A CUSTOMER SERVICE OFFICER. (改左grammar 同職位名)

I WORK IN THE IMPORT DEPARTMENT AND MY MAIN JOB DUTIES ARE IMPORT

DOCUMENT AND TELEPHONE HANDLING . (一個handling 就ok,加左個"the")

I THINK YOUR COMPANY WILL BE ACTING AS A LEADING ROLE IN THE AVIATION

INDUSTRY. (好累贅,所以改左,希望冇改變原意) SO I WOULD LIKE TO GET AN OFFER OF YOU COMPANY .

I BELIEVE THAT MY EXPERIENCE WOULD BE HELPFUL FOR ME TO WORK AT

YOUR COMPANY . (改左grammar)

IF I COULD HAVE THE OPPORTUNITY TO JOIN YOUR COMPANY , I WOULD HANDLE MY JOBS IN A CONFIDENT WAY.

大致上令呢篇自我介紹順左同客氣d , 希望你見工成功

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