幫我睇下文法有冇問題

2012-07-31 4:06 am
幫我睇下文法有冇問題:

My most unforgettable school picnic is go to the Wetland Park.There are different types of birds.There have I never seen the crocodile.I was very surprised.There the fresh air made me feel comfortable.I am happy because I know the different types of birds. I am looking for a chance to the Wetland Park again since I can learn more.

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2012-07-31 10:12 pm
My most unforgettable school picnic was going to the Wetland Park. There were different types of birds. I was very surprised to have seen a crocodile that I had never seen. The fresh air there made me feeling comfortable. I was happy because I learned the different types of birds. I am looking for a chance to visit/go the Wetland Park again so that I can learn more.
2012-07-31 7:29 am
It/this is a unforgettable memory in my life. I had a school picnic in wonderland, when I was a little kid, I don't even know what is love until I met her. She has golden brown hair, snow white skin and breathless face. She sings a song like Cinderella, a fairy tale dream girl. The attention of everyone has been attracted but finally do not know who the girl is. I am regretting of myself and wish to see her once again. However, I am so happy I used to saw a perfect one in world, in my mind.
2012-07-31 6:56 am
My most unforgettable school picnic is (in) the Wetland Park. There (were) different types of birds.There have I never seen the crocodile. I was very surprised. The fresh air made me feel comfortable. I (was) happy because I (have known) different types of birds. I am looking for a chance to (go to) the Wetland Park again since I can learn more.
2012-07-31 4:37 am
it was an unforgettable school pinic going to the hk wetland park. there are different kinds of birds. it was very surprising that i could have a look on the adorable coorodile because i have never seen a croodile before . fresh air really mde me feel comfortable. i am glad to know that there exists differnt kinds of birds. i am looking forward to visiting the wetland park again in order to learn more the beautiful environment.
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