急!幫忙英文句子翻譯是否正確

首先預告以下是以你的意思寫英文版本的內容而不是續字對字的譯文，你會發現英文用詞如果寫給外國人看有些不是按字典般的翻譯，要使用一些他們的習慣用詞和片語。請恕我評你的原譯有些寫錯字和錯PHRASE。

What do you think of your future? Although we cannot predict the future, we can still take it into our own hands. Since there are consequences that we can anticipate, we can be prepared, to act and decide upon what to do; from these we shall make a difference for our future.


註：
除了在占卜時一般不會說forsee the future，forsee的是一樣實際的結果outcome.
除了指回到未來那種改變或相對論式的時空轉變，不會用那麼確定的動詞effect/affect the future。

What do you think about your future? We have to create our future despite the fact that we fail to foresee it. There are something in this world that are predictable for us to prepare and take appropriate actions. The actions that you have taken will determine and have effect on your future.

What do you think about your future? Although we cannot foresee the future, we can create our own future by ourselves. As there are things we can speculate and thereby have preparation,take action and make decisions, which influence your future.

(How) do you (think) your future (will be)? (While) we cannot (predict) the future, (but) we (are able) to create their own future. Because some of the things we (are able to forecast , and to make ready, actions and decisions, and make those actions and decisions will affect your future

What do you think about your future? Although we could not foresee our future,but we can create our own by ourselves. Because there are things we can expect, by taking preparation,decision and action. And all of that will affect your future

What do you (think) (about) your future? Although we (cannot) foresee the future, we can create our own future, (b)ecause there are things we can (predict) and (prepare, take acition as well as determine). These action(s) (and) (decisions) will (affect) you future.