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2012-07-21 7:37 pm
1)Choose the right gift for a Chiinese friends.

2)I learn that how to congratulate parents on the birth of a child.

3)...,such as how to ceelebrate tranditional feastivals,weddings and birthdays in HK.

4)I thought that believe the wealth god is supposed to bring prosperity to the
family.

5)It is their traditional belief and view.It should be blaze abroad.

6)... because they are noy to believe the wealth god.

7)On the bridal party, there will borgain with the groom before thet give the bride
to him.

8)I throught that the number nine has the same sound in..

9)I thougt that one reason is that boys carry on the family name...

10)Also,when it comes time to divide up the family wealth...

11)Nowaday,a position iin society was not only for men.

12)Some women"s power are more that the mens.

13)Also,it let me give an insight into Chinese Culture.

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2012-07-22 10:25 am
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1) Choose the right gift for a Chinese friend.

2) I learn how to congratulate parents on the birth of their child.

3) ...... , for example, how to celebrate traditional festival, wedding and birthday in

I prefer to use "for example"; such as + noun, such as it is, such as to ...


4) I thought that belief in God of Fortune was supposed to bring prosperity to the family.
希臘神話, 是 Goddess of Fortune, God of Fortune解 “財神爺”

5) It is their traditional belief and view. It should be blazed abroad.
Blazed is the past participle of blaze (verb); ~ in passive voice
blaze =宣佈, 傳播, 不是解 “燃燒”

6)... because they don’t believe in God of Fortune.

7) At the bridal party, they will bargain with the groom before giving the bride to him.

8) I thought that the number nine had the same sound.

9) I thought that one reason was that boys should carry on the family name...

10) Moreover, when it comes to the time to divide up the family fortune...
In written English, avoid starting a sentence with also.

11) Nowadays a position in society is not only for men.

12) Some women have more power than men have.

13) It also let me give an insight into Chinese Culture.

Comment:
blaze (verb) = to make news or information widely known by telling people about it in a way they are sure to notice

~ from Oxford Advanced Learner's Dictionary
2012-07-21 8:06 pm
1) Choose the right gift for a Chinese friend.

2)I learn how to congratulate parents on the birth of a child.

3) ...,such as how to celebrate traditional festivals, weddings and birthdays in HK.

4) I thought that believe in the wealth god is suppose to bring prosperity to the
family.

5) It is their traditional belief and view. (It should be blaze abroad .)--不明白
it should be burn down? -- 它应该被烧毁?

6) ... because they don't believe in the wealth god.

7) On the bridal party, there will bargain with the groom, before they give the bride to him.

8) I thought that the number nine has the same sound in..

9) I thought that one reason, is that boys should carry on with their family name...

10) Also,when it comes to time to divide up the family wealth...

11) Nowadays,a position in the society are not only for men.

12) Some women have power that are more than men.

13) Also,it let me have an insight into Chinese Culture.
參考: me not sure with 7) and 5)


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