急 英文改錯

這妳好像不是你的寫作而是功課...所以除了文法錯改正外寫不好的不改了

While I was working in my office yesterday, my cousin stopped by to visit me.

Yuki stayed home because she caught a bad cold.

Did you speak English before you were come here?

Yesterday, while I was working at my computer, Shelley was suddenly coming into the room. I didn't know she was there. I was concentrate hard on my work. When she suddenly spoke, I [] jumped. She startled me.

My brother [] looks like our father, but I [] resemble my mother.

While I was surfing the internet yesterday, I found a really interesting Web site.

While I was working in my office yesterday.My cousin stops by visit me.

Yuki stayed home because she has a bad cold.

Did you speak English before you are come here?

Yesterday,I was working at my computer room.Shelley was came into the room. I didn't know she is there.I was concentrate hard on my work.When she speak,I was jump up.She scare me.

My brother is looks like our father,but I am resembling my mother.

While I was surfing the internet yesterday.I was finding a really interting Website.




s.p.:I hope I can help you!^_^

2012-07-19 14:48:00 補充：
While I was surfing the internet yesterday.I was found a really interting Website.

While I was at work yesterday in my office, my cousin stops by and visit me.

Yuki stayed at home because she caught a bad cold.

have you acknowledge English before you came here?


Yesterday,while I was on my computer, Shelley suddenly came into my room.
but I didn't notice her there, because I was concentrating on my work.
When she suddenly speak, it had startled me.

My brother looks like our father, but I am resembling with my mother.

While I was surfing on the internet yesterday, I found a really interesting Website.