幫作首詩,thx

--------A poem that rhyme with poet bard-------
Summer days are here again
Under the sun weather and rain
Much HK Gold Coasting on plain
Many "lai-chee" of ripening grain
Enrouting drive on Castle Peak Main
Round about Merry-Go-Round children gain.

2012-07-19 13:45:25 補充：
---------The rhythm of the Summer----------
Summer solstice in our eye
Universities closed along
Might mark summer sports sea and sky
Marine with summer camp we belong
Existential notion that bathers lie
Rain to clean our suntan lotion before long.