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2012-07-15 5:27 am

Each of the following short paragraphs contains three mistakes. Rewrite the paragraphs, correcting all the mistakes.

(1)John did not have enough time to finish answer all the questions. As the result, he fails to passing the examination.
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(2)Mary is likes milk very much. Every morning she has milk on breakfast. Doctors often say that milk is good to health.
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(3)Pollution was the release of waste matter or energy into the environment by human activities so that it cause damages to living systems. The government has various policies fight against pollution.
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(4)The tress at the entrance of the school have grew so much that they nearly block the entrance. The principal said yesterday that those trees must cut down. The workers come tomorrow to take action.
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2012-07-15 6:15 am

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Each of the following short paragraphs contains three mistakes. Rewrite the paragraphs, correcting all the mistakes.

(1)John did not have enough time to finish answer all the questions. As a result, he failed to pass the examination.

as ... result :一定是用 a ; failed:這兒應用過去式
to pass ; to後面的動詞要用原式________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

(2)Mary likes milk very much. Every morning she has milk for breakfast. Doctors always say that milk is good to health.

likes: 一句簡單句子只可有一個動詞,is 是多餘的; ......breakfast:一定用for

always 解作經常 ; often解作偶然
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(3)Pollution is the release of waste matter or energy into the environment by human activities so that it causes damages to living systems. The government has various policies to fight against pollution.

is : 不應用過去式; it是第三身單數,後面的動詞須+s
to = 為著
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(4)The trees at the entrance of the school have grown so much that they nearly block the entrance. The principal said yesterday that those trees must be cut down. The workers will come tomorrow to take action.

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have grown 完成式的特徵: has/have + p.p. ; must be cut down 被斬去(被動式)

The workers will : 將來式

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