✔ 最佳答案
有太多句法錯寫,不單單是文法修正,可參考以下寫法(有些看不明你的意思,只能大意重寫相關的內容)
Do you know that there are two different source of energy on this planet? One obvious one is the Solar system, another is a Volcano. As many people know that a volcano is an opening or eruption on the plant’s surface or crust, where molten rock, ash, and gases [] escape from below the surface. Volcanic activity involves the extrusion of rock deep inside mountains over a long period of time. The importance of volcanic eruption lies in its geological location related to different mountains and the damage it can do to the environment. A volcano is a mountain with a large opening at the top where hot liquid rocks and ash clouds eject from inside the earth. For example, there is a volcano named “Vesuvio”, it erupted in AD79, and it is a kind of stratovolcano in Italy. I think a major volcano eruption has dangerous effect to everything on the surface of the earth. [這句不是lastly亦跟前後文未有連繫,可改放在另一位置寫作危害內容的開頭] The magma forms the crust of the volcano after the eruption. The most common types of volcano we see are shield volcanoes, stratovolcanoes and cinder cones. Volcanic activities move around the earth regularly. Many active volcanoes grow to form islands and small mountains that seem to be waken from time to time.