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Just a suggestion:
The space was designed by a team of professionals (an architect or an artist) from the architectural firm 1:1 Limited, known for their unexpected avant-garde approach. The design reflects strongly the clean minimalist lines that are a fundamental part of the ro aesthetic.
Comment:
(1) Break the original sentence into two separate sentences.
(2) Firm (公司) 不能設計, 是專業人設計. You can put down the name of the architect or artist if you know his/her name.
(3) “was designed” 和 “has been designed” 在同一句子出現, 是 redundant (多餘的), design改了一個做verb,一個做 noun, 比較好點
(4) avant-garde ~ spelling
(5) clean 和 minimalist 中間, 沒有 comma
When we use two or more adjectives from the same class, we must separate them by commas. By far the most common use of multiple adjectives is in the category of opinion
e.g. a charming, handsome actor. (There is a comma.)
clean – quality adjective. It can be graded. (cleaner, cleanest)
minimalist – classifying adjective. It cannot be graded.
These two adjectives are of different class. We should not separate them by comma.
e.g. It a pretty minimalist home.
Another example:
The book is written in simple everyday language.
2012-07-17 07:29:08 補充:
SPACE:
create a space, fill a space, 我不知道 deign a space 這樣講可不可以? 每一專業有自己專門用語 (terminology) 我不是 architect, designer, 所以不清楚. Please replace “space” with an appropriate word if that is not the term used in that field.
2012-07-17 07:37:32 補充:
Interior design 有 space design 這個 term, guess it is OK