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My name is XYZ. I am in my mid-30s. (Do not suggest to put age). I have been working as an office electrical work supervisor (Not sure about your job title) for about three years at ABC Company. My current scope of work includes XXXX (you need a verb before high and low pressure equipment, either monitoring/overseeing/repairing, without the verbs means your job duty is an equipment!!) the high and low pressure equipment, plant and equipment maintenance, and controlling the circuit. I am also responsible for emergency repairs, such as motors, ACB, GCB, OCB, Sump pump, lighting, PLC control, inverter, Ozone equipment and other different devices. Sometimes, i have to supervise subcontractors as well. I am currently holding a driver license along with "Light Goods Vehicle" and "Government Vehicle" permits.

I do not quite understand what are you trying to imply in your last 2 sentences. Could you say it in Chinese?



**Chinese is different from English, you CANNOT use comma in between all your sentences. You have to use fullstop/period to separate what you want to say. Now, i couldn't even tell if Ozone equipment and different devices, the control circuit belongs to emergency repair or they are part of your job duties.

My name is xxxxx, I am thirty-seven years old, I come from XXX(company name) office electrical work supervisor II about three years. The scope of work includes high and low pressure equipment, plant and equipment maintenance and emergency repair, such as motors, ACB, GCB , OCB, Sump pump equipment, lighting, PLC control, inverter , Ozone equipment and different devices, the control circuit, sometimes I need to supervise subcontractors work, I own a car, Light goods vehicle and government Driving permit, I think that if I join your section of the company, I will have opportunities for promotion.