大學interview自我介紹

以下大學interview的自我介紹得唔得?

My name is xxx. I am xx years old. I am form 7 graduated. I was studying in xxx from form 1 to form 7. I like listening to music as it is a good way for me to relax myself and relieve my pressure. Also, I like reading books such as fiction and DIY books( 教人做手工的書係唔係咁講?). Reading is interesting and I can learn a lot from reading. I am friendly, cheerful, responsible and reliable. I was the school librarian, prefect and the chairman of the Art club as my teacher found that I can think independently(獨立思考係咁講嗎?) and have critical thinking(我咁講會不會很怪?). Besides, I am obedient and had a good record in school. I am interested in studying in law and business(用interested會不會唔好?)because I will have theoretical and practical understanding of fundamental law and business principles after I study in this programme. That understanding is helpful for me to engage in the emerging international business environment and rapid growth in business regulation such as the employment of labour and environmental protection. This is the end of my self-introduction. Thank you!


大學interview有冇限時? 我這個自我介紹會不會太長? 有冇d野應該要講多些, 或者講少些?