小學 [關於逗號, and, 同埋幾個 verbs]

2012-06-21 12:32 am
a balanced diet:
- eat more vegetables
- eat less meat
- avoid junk food and snacks


我見到有人將以上 points 寫成 :
... a balaced diet like eat more vegetables, less meat, avoid junk food and snacks.


其實係唔係錯左 ?
最好應該點寫 ?
thx~
更新1:

Po lan : 如果我想用返同以上 points 一樣既字眼呢 ? 即係同返 eat XXX , avoid XXX 咁. 我有諗過 : ... a balaced diet like eating more vegetables and less meat, and avoiding junk food and snacks. 但用咁多 and 又好似好累贅咁...

更新2:

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回答 (5)

2012-06-21 12:40 am
✔ 最佳答案
a balanced diet includes more vegetables,less meat, and no junk food and snacks
2012-06-26 10:46 pm
To achieve a balanced diet, one should eat more vegetables but less meat. It is also very important to avoid junk food and snacks.
2012-06-21 11:21 pm
a balanced diet:
- eat more vegetables
- eat less meat
- avoid junk food and snacks
... a balanced diet like eat more vegetables, less meat, avoid junk food and snacks.
In your example, like (prep.) means for example (like = for example)
**There should be a comma befoe like or for example if it is followed by a phrase/ a clause without a finite verb.
, like
, for example
eat and avoid are not finite verbs but infinitives wthout to (to eat) &(to avoid)
the sentence should read like this:
.... a balanced diet, like eat more vegetables, eat less meat, and avoid junk food and snacks.
2012-06-21 1:19 am
...a balanced healthy diet means eats more vegetables,less meat,avoid junk food(spoken) (and) snacks.
2012-06-21 1:10 am
唔係錯,
1.a balaced diet like eat more vegetables, less meat, avoid junk food and snacks

中'like' 意思係''像/如'',5係''喜歡'',所以不用+ing

2.a balaced diet like eating more vegetables and less meat, and avoiding junk food and snacks.
5駛+''and'' la!! 像中文一樣,你5會寫''我喜歡吃紅豆,和黄豆,和綠豆'' 咖馬!!

Hope i can help you!!

2012-06-20 17:15:40 補充:
可寫成:a balanced diet is about eat more vegetables,less meat and avoid junk food or snacks.(easiest)
參考: me, me


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