咁樣啲自我介紹得唔得

我十日後要去job interview, 我應徵啲job is temporary executive assistant, 我想問以下的自我介紹得唔得( 我冇工作經驗, 係個中七畢業生): My name is xxx. I am a form 7 graduate. I am interested in this job as my characters suit the requirement of this job. First, I am friendly and cheerful. My friends said it is easily for them to get in with me. In F.4, my school teacher chose me to be the chairwoman of the Art club as she found that I could communicate with different students and build a good relationship with the club members. Second, I am responsible. That's why my F.1 class teacher promoted me to be a librarian. She believed that I would responsible for my duty and would not be late or absent without any reasons. Third, I am obedient and had a good record in school as I did not get any demerits due to failure of hair check or breaking the school rule. That's why the teacher of discipline department chose me to be a prefect in F.6. Although I do not get any job experience, I would strive my best to work hard if you choose me to be a temporary executive assistant.