請幫我確認這的英文文法對不對!!謝謝!!!

是的，我生病了，因為你那迷人的微笑使人瘋狂的，我知道你是愛我，只是現在你自己還不知道

Yes, I'm sick because of your charming smile that makes me crazy. I'm
sure that you love me, though you're not aware yet.


註：
用because of是可以的, 只是後面要加關代that (關代當主詞時不可省略).
drive sb crazy的意思較偏向於激怒, 不太合本句語意.

the grammar should like this....
S+make(causative V)+O or participle
sometimes, we can use the adjective or noun phrase to instead of participle
ex:
keep him safe
make the baby smile

if i were you , i will say ...
yes , i am sick .
because of your charming smile dirvies/makes me carzy,
i know you love me, too ,but you may not really understand now.

Yes - I've been ill because your charming smile drives me crazy. I know that you're in love with me, it is just that you don't even know yet.

Because of 刪掉of就好
因為because of後面跟noun phrase,
而你後面是跟了SVC(subject,verb,complement),所以要用because