幫忙修正這篇英文電郵文法

Tam

2012-06-06 6:50 pm

I am reviewing notebook R&M. I see there is higher revenue & COS booked in Jan and Feb. I would like to know the following information:
1. More notebooks return to repair (多了電腦送修)? Can the trend to be kept in coming months? (未來幾個月能維持這數量嗎)
2. What is the GM % which you expect?
3. Do you provide any information to Billing team so that they can booked the monthly provision in more accuracy (讓他們更精確地book數).

請用簡單句子，這是internal的電郵故不用寫得太深奧，但希望文法能正確，讓對方能看得懂

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[匿名]

2012-06-13 7:41 am

✔ 最佳答案

I am reviewing notebook R&M. I can see that there is a higher revenue & COS booked in Jan and Feb. I would like to know about the following information:
1. Are there more notebooks returned for repair? Can the trend be maintained in the coming months/ in forseeable future (i quite like the latter phrase)?
2. What is the expected gross margin %?
3. Can you provide any information to the /Billing team/ (i'm not sure about this term) so that they can book the monthly provision more accurately?

Please make amendment where necessary.
Thanks!

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