小一英文作句

To June p1 5 marks,How can you give 5 marks to me,at least 22 marks??????????????????
(1)My dream is to become an airline pilot in rank.
----error and accident be avoided.
----autopilot be established instead of me.
-----alight on KaiTak Airport,Kln City be very dangerous!

(2)A trip to Korea by HongTai.
-----Seoul,Fusan,Samsung+Food be savoured.
-----Why not visit N.Korea,Japan, Peking,Shanghai,Yellow Sea of Japan as well????????????????

thank you very much

要留意小一學生所認識的字有限，而且句子通常是 simple sentence. 除非讀英文小學，否則應該只用 simple present tense.

1. My dream is to become a pilot
Today is my birthday.
My father buys me a toy plane.
it is red in colour.
It is very cute.
I like it very much.
I want to become a pilot.
I dream to fly around the world one day.

2. A trip to Korea
My parents and I go to Korea by plane.
Korea is beautiful.
It is full of fun.
I like the rides in the theme park.
It is exciting.
We have Korean food.
It is yummy.

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