英文作文(要修改)

2012-05-27 8:46 pm
這個STORY 我寫的 但是 我沒有idea 了... 可以改改嗎? 這個是關於 我小時的時候 和 長大的時候 老師要看我的作文 是 第一段 是寫 小時後 以後第2段是長大後 要看看這2段的相反

When I was a little boy , I wanted to be a teenager.I had fantastic memories.For example:My parents looked like giants.When i went to a basketball court for the first time, I saw the goal ring and it was like a tall building, It scared me !!!
"Be careful when you are crossing the road".Mum said. that made me feel angry.I didn't like my mum at that moment, I tried to ignore her. I wanted to be alone. Upon reflection my mum was just protecting me.

Now, i'm 15 years old, I don't want to be a teenager 可以幫我作嗎..要相反
還要用多一點language feature

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回答 (2)

2012-06-03 10:18 pm
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Having ignoring Mom telling me more careful to crossing the roads,wearing more in cold weather,how about having sex with female students in my class? Leave me alone or I shall go out and never come back. Every young man's life has had such a period of adolescense(=adult lesson).It's the time in boy's life when he develops from a child into an adult between the ages of 15 and 18. Now I am 15 ,am extremely attractive young man and good at sc works.hence the problems I may face may not be solved by Mom, which may be protected and solved by Social Security Officers. So bye bye Mom!
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2012-05-28 7:43 am
Having ignoring Mom telling me more careful to crossing the roads,wearing more in cold weather,how about having sex with female students in my class? Leave me alone or I shall go out and never come back. Every young man's life has had such a period of adolescense(=adult lesson).It's the time in boy's life when he develops from a child into an adult between the ages of 15 and 18. Now I am 15 ,am extremely attractive young man and good at sc works.hence the problems I may face may not be solved by Mom, which may be protected and solved by Social Security Officers. So bye bye Mom!
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