幫忙修正英文兩篇短文

Tam

2012-05-27 8:21 am

雖然可以用中文，但想加強一下寫作所以試用英文寫：

1.
Let us start the first activity this Saturday.
I suggest the first activity is bowling practice.
I prefer the venue in XX bowling center, as our competitive on Sunday was held in there.
However, 地點1 or 地點2 also fine with me.
Welcome give me comments/recommendations.

2.
My father and I have applied BOC online banking service. However, many advertisements are received in my mail box and make me feel trouble. Would you tell us how to make an unsubsribe request (此句有沒有更好的寫法，另外如要加上step by step 應加在哪)?

回答 (1)

[匿名]

2012-05-27 9:19 pm

✔ 最佳答案

基本上沒有大問題， good！Let us start the first activity thisSaturday.
I suggest the bowlingpractice as the first activity.
I prefer the venue in XX bowling center, as our competition on this Sunday will be (future tense) held(X in) there.
However, I am fine with地點1 or 地點2 either.You are welcomed toprovide comments or recommendations.

2.
My father and I have applied yourcompany’s （對象） BOC online banking service. However, many advertisements arereceived in my mail box and they make me feel troubled (trouble is a noun, you need an adj. J ). Wouldyou please (more polite, haha) teach us how to stopadvertisements from flowing into my mailbox step by step? Thank you. (more politeagain :P) (此句有沒有更好的寫法，另外如要加上stepby step 應加在哪)? (應加在尾 J )

2012-05-27 13:22:47 補充：
打 “trouble is a noun” 時，想到一首歌，好好聽ga!!
叫 “trouble is a friend”
trouble is a friend oh trouble is a friend oh oh!
by Lenka~
要聽呀～ :D

參考: all by myself, (random comments :P)

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