Desperate!!!!! English Grammar

2012-05-25 7:16 am
Thanks for giving your precious time for answering some of my questions!!!

I am doing a very important essay and I cant afford to make a single silly mistakes!! Therefore, I hope the answers given are correct. My life is on your hands!!!!

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1) Is it correct to write --> The death of Tim, a freshman at Tung Chi College who was a football player...
2)teenage bullying (or) teenager bullying??
3) is it correct to describe a trend is worrying??
4) There are no specific laws (or) there is no specific laws???
5)Not only can there be a deterrent effect on XX, we can also XXX or Not only can there be a deterrent effect on XX, but we can also XXX
6)With the food products being cheing checked every now and then, together with the punishment system, it can XXX or With the food products being cheing checked every now and then together with the punishment system, it can XXX
7) Is it correct to say --> It is no exaggerating to say that ... If no, how to correct it???

回答 (3)

2012-05-26 12:03 am
✔ 最佳答案
1) The death of Tim, who was a freshman at Tung Chi College and a football player, was a tragedy resulting from bullying.

2) teenage bullying (teenage = adjective)

3) the trend is worrying (趨勢令人擔憂) correct

4) There are no specific laws. (plural verb for plural noun)

5) Not only can there be a deterrent effect on XX, but we can also XXX

6) With the food products being checked every now and then, and with the punishment system, it can XXX

7) It is no exaggerating to say that ...
It is an understatement to say that ....


2012-05-27 23:54:58 補充:
worrying (adjective)
=something that is worrying makes you feel anxious or worried:
e.g. The situation is extremely worrying

(Longman dictionary)
2012-05-27 4:27 am
(1)The death of Tim,a freshman at Tung Chi College,who was a football player,was a tragedy resulting from bullying.
(2)teenage( adj) bullying
(3)(the trend is worrying).What worries us is how (the trend)is going to get about-------
(4)There are no specific laws (plural)
(5)(Not only)can there be a deterrent effect on xx,(but we can also)xxx
(6)With the food products be carefully checked every now and then,together with the punishment system,it can(be said that)
(7)It is not exaggerating to say that-------
參考: google website
2012-05-26 12:19 am
1) The death of Tim, a freshman at Tung Chi College, who was a football player ...

2) teenage bullying [teenage = 階段的形容詞, teenager = 青少年人(類別)]
3) the trend is worrying (=趨勢在擔憂當中) 不對。你想表達「趨勢令人擔憂」可以寫為the trend is worrisome (但這個字可能太前衞)

4) There are no specific laws.

5) Not only can there be a deterrent effect on XX, but we can also XXX

6) With the food products being checked every now and then, together with the punishment system, it can XXX要分隔附加的子句另外cheing是個甚麼字?

7) It is not exaggerating to say that ... 或者There is no exaggeration in saying that …或者It is not an exaggeration to say that …


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