Please help me correct this paragraph, this is a cover letter.
Dear Hiring Manager,
I was excited to read about the job posting for Programmer, I am writing to apply for this position.
My recent job is an analyst programmer work at xxx IT Limited. My duties are system development, enhancement and bug fixing on systems like HR, access card and medical card services system.
And my previous job is a programmer, worked at zzz Holdings Limited for 1 year and 4 months and duties include POS, HR and MSSQL ad-hoc software design, development, bug fixing, testing and documentation.
In an internship with yyyyy department of Government, I handled a survey on the mobile phone coverage in country parks.
These experiences granted me, project planning and development skill, communication skills and strong analytical ability. In addition to my experience, I have strong communication and customer service skills.
I have experienced ASP.NET, VB.NET, C#, MSSQL T-SQL, VFP of FoxPro, Crystal Report, HTML, php, javascript, JAVA J2SE, J2EE, Visual Web Developer, SQL Server Management Studio.
My resume is enclosed for your reference, I look forward to have an opportunity for an interview in which I can further present my suitability for this position.
Thank you for your time and consideration.